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Poll results:

Who do you think will win?

Alexandria - 9

Missy - 4

Who would you rather win?

Alexandria - 11

Missy - 6

Winner Guessing Contest

I'm not quite sure what the prize will be, but I'll post it when I do. Only one guess per user and character. Also, no changing your guess once you pick someone. I decided to let the winner choose a contestant to return for the next All-Stars story.

Alexandria - She made it far last time, but you never know with Sprink stories. :P SG has a habit of changing his siggy once a month. 21:07, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Audrey II -On the Floor, E.T. [[User blog:Snowgirl57|and She's So Gone. to On the Floor, [[User t 21:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Autumn ---Doyce! ^{"To be awesome, you have to think awesome."} 20:41, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brad - Lulucas777 20:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dante - Autumn's gone, but I really like this guy! So... win-win? Goldenshane 21:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Doyce - I wanted Irene or Alexandria, but they are taken. Bruno is my name! Talk! My editcount! 00:31, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Eduardo -- The Anonymous User 21:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC) (my top choice, Joanna, was taken)

Irene - Love her! --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 21:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Joanna ---Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 20:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Micky D. - Mick Dizzle, Boy-eee! TDIwriter^{Ruining everyone's fun since 2009!} 21:16, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Missy - TDAddict - ^{You know who he is, and don't forget it.} 20:54, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Nathan - Talking to the girl with the broken smile... ^{Asking if she'd like} _{to stay a while, yeah...} 20:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Priscilla - But if your thinking about my baby. ^{It dont matter.. if your BLACK or WHITE. ♥} 20:58, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sebastian -Let Manatee laugh at the cool 20:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Stevie - Damn school. My real choice is Vanessa.-Slicer37.

Tsuyoshi - Owenandheatherfan 21:28, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Vanessa - --Brushogun ^{Save MIGHTY nature ♚ File:Samurai.gif} 21:01, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Willow - Tdi ^{Heavy Metal Lover - Lady Gaga California King Bed - Rihanna} 21:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yesenia - Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 20:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Zane - All teh good ones have been taken, one of the disadvantages of school. xD --Nduke, the only basketball team on the wiki! Go Duke! 22:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Final Three Guessing Contest

Guess the final three right, and get a prize. Step right up! Make your guess. If it's proven wrong by an elimination, then you can make a new guess, but only then. Also, leave a date on your guess, and don't erase it once it's wrong. I'll strike it out. The prize will be that you can choose a character to return in the Next All-Star story, which will be an early eliminated character story. Okay, guess away.

Autumn, Missy, Dante Toadgamer80^{The jester of Tortuga.} 21:20, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Autumn, Missy, Tsuyoshi--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 21:21, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Audrey II, Zane, Missy. -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 21:43, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria, Missy, Sebastian. My name is Bruno! 21:54, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuyoshi, Autumn, and Stevie. Lump off, MOM! 22:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Dante, Missy, Zane Nashwalker 13:11, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Dante, Autumn, Stevie--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 15:16, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuyoshi, Doyce, and Alexandria?- The Anonymous User 15:20, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Autumn, Audrey II and Sebastian - I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 18:00, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Stevie, Missy, and Tsuyoshi. TDAddict ^{I just got tired of my other sig.} 18:28, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Audrey II, Sebastian and Tsuyoshi. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:03, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Stevie, Zane, and Alexandria--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 19:41, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuyoshi, Missy, Sebastian--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:59, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Missy, Sebastian, Dante Toadgamer80^{The jester of Tortuga.} 20:05, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Missy, Audrey II, Tsuyoshi. ~ _RPs&^Writes!♪Dakota♫^Talks&_Edits! 20:54, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Missy, Tsuyoshi, and Dante- Just Ice1 19:18, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Audrey II, Stevie, Missy. -Lalainee^{You are beautiful.} 20:42, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Dante, Sebastian, Alexandria - Hey! Aren't you that Mysterious user? 19:11, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Missy, Alexandria, and Audrey II. TDAddict ^{I just got tired of my other sig.} 19:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Audrey II, Missy, Sebastian. -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 21:43, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Dante, Sebastian, Tsuyoshi. Nad331 12:25, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Missy, Tsuyoshi, Alexandria Smitty Werbenjagermanjensen^{He was #1.} 20:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuyoshi, Sebastian, Alexandria. Hey! Aren't you that Mysterious user? 03:37, December 1, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuyoshi, Missy, Doyce Dramatic Kracko 18:01, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria, Audrey II and Tsuyoshi I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 18:05, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Doyce, Audrey II, Tsuyoshi--Radicalm18 ^{"Everybody best be lookin' at me, cuz I've got Christmas swag!"} 18:30, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria, Doyce, Missy. My name is Bruno! 19:34, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Doyce, Missy, Audrey II. This is my fifth guess. XDD -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 21:27, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria, Audrey II and Missy. Dramatic Kracko 17:28, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria, Tsuyoshi, Missy. :P My name is Bruno! 21:10, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

We have a winner. Congrats, Toad. Tell me who you want to return on a chat pm, preferably. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:27, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Chat 1

Woah. Cool name. --Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 17:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. :B Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:49, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The Title Is Awesome,Hope Grace Returns,Chancellor cherry 17:56, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I really, really, really hope Xiomara returns! :D I'm on the edge of glory ^{and I'm hanging on a moment with you} I'm on the edge with you!

Thanks guys. TDIwriter helped me decide on the title. And Zanna... Xiomara isn't from this canon, so she won't appear. Sorry. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:05, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Dang Know it won't be so good. :( xD I'm on the edge of glory ^{and I'm hanging on a moment with you} I'm on the edge with you!

Thanks. :P Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can't wait! :D I'm on the edge of glory ^{and I'm hanging on a moment with you} I'm on the edge with you!

Can't wait for this story to come out! I've been waiting for it since All Stars 1 ended. Oweguy Wanted a new sig So he changed it 18:09, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I was kind of disappointed with Athletics, thinking that Reality and Tropics were better when I went back and read them. I hope bringing back old characters will kind of help, and I'm still kind of interested. :) Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 18:17, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. Sorry TDAthletics disappointed, since I'm still working on it. :P I have a lot of stuff planned for this story, so I hope it doesn't disappoint. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:23, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I hope Naomi, and Micky D they were the best couple ever FanOfStuff ^{Defy Gravity}

Thanks. You'll have to wait and see, of course. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:34, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! New story. The title seems intriguing. xD I'll be a troll or evil queen. I'll be a human jelly bean. 'Cause every day is Halloween, for me... 18:36, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I like it when people like my titles. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:37, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

You've created this story about an hour ago, and the talk page is already filling up FanOfStuff ^{Defy Gravity}

Dude, this is a Sprink story. That always happens. XD Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 18:45, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

New season... Epic. I hope Topher returns. Hey Sprink, will there be an all-star season for time travel and superpowered?

EnTrey- Topher FTW! 

I believe Sprink said that the fantasy series ended. I want it to continue too, more than I want this series to continue. Ugh! This latte's cold! You're fired! 22:45, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. So exciting for this season. I hope Irene, Patsy, Dante, Emmy and Topher made it. Bruno is my name! Talk! My editcount! 23:44, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Can't wait! Seems so cool! Like all Sprink stories! :D --Lulu. Yes I have the name of a ballerina. 23:51, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, everyone. And yeah, EnTrey. I ended the second series due to lack of ideas for it. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 13:23, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yay! I love this new season all ready! All Stars was great and I'm expecting this to live up to it. But what do you mean you ended the second series? Last Of The Gophers!!! 15:57, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The fantasy stories. I ran out of ideas for it. I'm glad your excited for this series. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 16:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. Thats sad. Oh well. I can't wait for the best of the best. I'm going to be sad by who goes first no matter who it is :( (Unless it's one of the twins!) Baby could we make a home in the stars, Baby somewhere in a galaxy far, Ohh, ohhh, ohh you're my future love <3 17:03, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

You're on a hot streak, Sprink! All-Stars is my favorite of your canons and Athletics falls in second, so this is sure to succeed. Doyce!--Radicalm18 _____/\__________\O/_______ The shark is coming!!! 13:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I hope from Total drama reality Naomi, Micky D, Grant, Ruth, and Irene return. I think Irene might actually return, but I'm not so sure about the others. FanOfStuff DefiesGravity

Thanks for those comments. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:48, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the fantasy, so erm, I'm a bit dissappointed. But I LOVED characters with a personility like Nightshades. Also I hope to see a pretty girl back (like Dinah or Herman?). I consider Herman a girl and I also want to see a winner back! Maybe Sabrina or Katrina Go Team Noah 04:32, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mind if I rank all the contestants so far?-Slicer37

This will be a great story :) Gwen is SO overrated!! 05:09, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Is anyone excited for this to start, tomorrow? 8D Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm ecstatic! I pray that I get to the WGC in time.--Doyce! ^{"To be awesome, you have to think awesome."} 03:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm.... Odd. You three most under handed villains (Missy, Dante, and Nathan) have all returned... Villain alliance, anyone? XD I've been going over the cast, and noticed something:

• Strong Males: Stevie, Tsuyoshi, Dante, Eduardo, Doyce
• Smart Males: Zane, Micky D (ish kinda?), Sebastian, Brad, Nathan
• Smart Females: Autumn, Irene, Audrey II (in a sense), Yesenia (she's a poser so she must know a lot of trivial things), Alexandria (demonstrated in final four)
• Strong Females: Missy, Priscilla, Willow, Joanna, Vanessa

Some reasons are a bit floppy, but could this be a Brains vs. Brawns season?--Spotted at the hottest shows, interview on Charlie Rose, they all want a piece of you! 03:52, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Switch Mickey D and Tsuyoshi and we're good.

I loved the first chapter. I'm hoping the Winner Guessing Contest will be up soon. Go Irene! I love her! I hope she stays in to the bitter end! --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 18:16, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

...NOLAN?! This was maybe one of the most awesome first chapters in a while. :P My faves right now are Alex (obviously), Doyce (obviously), Micky D, and Yesenia. Stevie was epic too. :B I hope Nolan hosts the whole season. Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 18:21, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. This is like my favorite introduction chapter EVER! Alexandria and Zane... YES!!! Zane has some pretty smooth pick-up lines I must admit. My favorite part of the chapter had to be "I don't know if I'm supposed to say this or not..." Doyce looks to both of his sides. "I think Tsuyoshi might be... gay." XD I was laughing so hard. I want to see more Doyce and Tsuyoshi. And I'm also glad that Brad is showing some of his old self. I liked the old Brad TM. XD. Oh yeah, and Nolan. I'm kinda gonna miss Chris. He kinda makes Total Drama, but I can't say I'm sad to see Nolan. I can't wait for the winner guessing contest. And I can't wait for the next chapter! :DDD--Doyce! ^{"To be awesome, you have to think awesome."} 18:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Love the first chapter! lmao I am gonna LOVE this season <3 Got it memorized? Got what memorized? I have no idea. 18:27, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I liked the first chapter! I thought Nolan as host seemed funny. Let's hope he doesn't mess up. All the characters were introduced well. I loved Tsuyoshi and Doyce in this chapter. They seemed funny! This season's gonna be fun! Oweguy Wanted a new sig So he changed it 18:59, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I know Radicalm already said it but i will say again: Best introduction chapter ever! I changed my opinion on Doyce's return, he's awesome. Him and Tsuyoshi's interactions were funny too, and I think there isn't a contestant that I didn't like. And Nolan as the host is great too,I hope he hosts it until the end. But the best part was the changing subject part with Alexandria and Nolan. I think this will be your best story ever! (maybe it's too early to say that for sure, but who cares?) Let Manatee laugh at the cool 20:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

... wow. This was a lot better then I thought it would be. xD I was afraid you'd ruin my favorite characters (such as Zane, Alexandria, and Micky D), instead, though, you made them just as awesome, and in Zane's case, even better. xD You even made Doyce tolerable. :o =P The only characters I sincerly disliked was Eduardo and Nathan, mainly due to their lack of screentime. =P Talking to the girl with the broken smile... ^{Asking if she'd like} _{to stay a while, yeah...} 20:43, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much for the comments, all. I really appreciate the positive feedback, and the reaction to Doyce and Tsuyoshi, as I was kind of unsure about it. Manatee, I think it'll be good, but what do I know? It all depends on what the fans think, I guess (it's measure of success, I mean). Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:45, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. This chapter was win. I'm so excited for this story, since it has every one of my favorite characters from seasons 1, 2, 4, and 5. Even those that aren't my favorites are fun to read about. After being gone for so long, it's almost like watching old home movies, seeing all these classic characters, (and the newer ones, too). I too, was a little afraid that I might not like one of my favorites, but I am not disappointed. Zane was epic as ever, besting Alexandria in the game of sarcasm, and Brad's Bradness still shines through. Mick Dizzle is back and better than ever, and Doyce is still Doyce. Heck, it's even nice to see Nathan again. TDIwriter^{Ruining everyone's fun since 2009!} 21:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Autumn... it's so good to see you back! Even though you've become a bit more snarky, it's still adorable! I'm also really happy that Tsuyoshi's a little more open about himself. I like him quite a bit, actually. He won't win (neither will Doyce if he continues being homophobic) but it'll be fun reading about him! I loved that bit about Doyce and Tsuyoshi.

Anyway, Alexandria and Zane? Who woulda thunk? I mean, they're complete opposites in terms of first letters. But they're similar in snark! Oh, and Missy's (aside from Autumn and Audrey II) is my favorite. It's so obvious that she's fake! I mean, who says those things anymore? Although, some people still say dear, but not half of the way she says things. It'll be fun reading about her once more!

Oh Micky D... how I love to read about you, and dislike. You're annoying, but so hilarious! I'm at a constant war with myself about whether I like you or not. Guess we'll find out! Oh, and Yesenia's back. Joy! And Willow's back... yay? XD I must admit, I love Tsuyoshi, Autumn, and Joanna's constant remarks about others have changed.

Speaking of Joanna, I love her new obsession! At first it was comparing everything to babies, now it's about her being obsessed with work! YAY!

Let's see... Brad's battle with himself is cool, Stevie's gone down in my list of Sprink characters. New age characters are okay and all, but it's weird seeing Stevie be like that. Honestly, being peaceful is awesome, but THAT peaceful? Let's see how far it goes before people realize they won't be able to confide in Stevie unless they get past his, "Love everyone" persona. XD

Alrighty, Vanessa's next. *gets a glare because he mentioned her and he's a dude* Moving on! Just kidding! I love that Vanessa's back. I hope that she goes far once more.

Oh, and Nathan... quit feeling sorry for yourself! Man up, put on something other than an undershirt, and try this season!

C-Bass! You're back! Woot for people who are like my friends! And Irene's still paranoid. YAY!

Aside from Dante (and Nolan who I'm so glad is hosting) I think I'm done here! Closing comments will be about Dante. I'm so glad that Dante's back. I hated him when I first read about him, but then I wrote for Nancy and now I love a good villain (not that Nancy's a good villain or anything) and Dante was just that. I can't wait to read about how he's changed. And forgive me for leaving such a huge comment. I want Autumn to win. Goldenshane 21:24, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for these comments. TDIwriter, I'm glad that no one really disappointed you too much (even Nathan). :) That's always a thing I worry over. >_< Thanks for the in depth comment, Shane. I appreciate it. It seems like mostly everyone there you like. As for Doyce, he hasn't done anything homophobic, I don't think. Maybe he's uncomfortable with the fact that he feels like he's the only one who knows that Tsuyoshi is gay, or something. He doesn't know how to approach it (say, he thinks Tsuyoshi is closeted, or something like that). Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:03, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

After reading the exclusive first chapter, I really liked it and I can see it becoming very intriguing with the Doyce and Tsuyoshi interactions. Everyone had a good amount of interaction between contestants but I felt Yesenia didn't have really much going in the first chapter. So far, I really like Vanessa's development and I could see her as a potential female winner but anything could happen so I won't jump to conclusions. If I could change one thing about Micky. D, it would be his over-confident attitude but yeah, that's basically who he is in terms. In the end of this chapter, it was really good and I'm looking forward to more chapters soon. --Rocks ^{Talkpage Contributions nature ♚ File:Samurai.gif} 22:10, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. :) Chalk up another one for the Doyce-Tsuyoshi interactions. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

OH! Now I get it! Doyce is right back up there then! *places Doyce above hot dogs in favorites scale* Goldenshane 23:15, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if I explained it the best, he's just kind of surprised at the moment, but still unsure as to whether he is or not. It's not from a 'homophobic' place, though. At least, that's not what I intended, what I explained is what I intended. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:53, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I liked the first chapter, alot. Tsuyoshi was a little 'main street', but he was main street in TDR too, so I guess that's how it works. I was pretty shocked about how everyone reacted around Joanna too :P Good story, though. I can't wait to see who is eliminated first :O Show me YOUR love! Show me YOUR smile! 00:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, My-Scope. I know Tsuyoshi seemed main, again, but to me, that's who he is. *shrug* Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:41, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the chapter. The best introduction chapter ever. I loved Irene and Alexandria (my 2 favorites character of this wikia). I also, loved that a lot of my favorites are back. I really liked Willow, Eduardo and Autumn, even though I didn't liked them in their originals seasons. The only one that I'm still disliking is Nathan, but I'm fell sorry for him. Nolan is a hilarious host. Doyce and Tsu... (I can't write him full name right) interactions is hilarious. Poor Missy, anybody believes that she's nice now. A season full of hot girls (Alex, Missy, Priscilla). :3 I have high hopes for this, and can maybe be my favorite season. :D Bruno is my name! Talk! My editcount! 00:55, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. I hope I don't disappoint. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:11, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, I missed entering the winner guessing contest. Anyways, Great first chapter! I think im rooting for Audrey II, Missy, Alexandria, Eduardo, or Nathan to win at this point. Also, I hope for a bunch of new alliances this season. I sorta think that certin guys and girls will click together and form a strong alliance. Then, Someone who is not in that alliance will realize that they will be picked off one by one and he/she will rally everyone else against that strong alliance. - Copper5

Thanks for the comment, Copper. Thanks for the speculation, too. I always like to hear what my readers think will happen. Sorry about the winner guessing contest, though. It seems to fill up relatively fast. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:21, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I loved Nathan's introduction of himself. But I think he's gonna be an early out because he'll put no effort into the challenges. Then, once he's eliminated, he'll reveal he was just trying to use a "Creigh" strategy by getting people to pity him. EnTrey 18:05, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I've got to ask though, why'd you put Nolan as host instead of Chris? And will he return to host later on? Nashwalker 18:10, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. Nash, I felt it was time for a change. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:32, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

What's Chris in jail for though, and will he return later on? Nashwalker 01:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Would it really hurt to have an episode with Doyce where he's NOT a total screen-hog? He's pretty much the postive version of Russell Hantz. Other than him, thoughts!

Support: Nathan, Missy, Brad, Joanna, Yesnia, Vanessa, Irene, Willow, Zane, Autumn.

Neutral: Stevie, Tsuyoshi, Mickey D, Dante, Sebistan, Audrey II,

Oppose: Doyce, Eduardo, Priscislia, Alexandria.

I love this cast. TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 20:38, August 27, 2011 (UTC).

The first chapter was awesome, Sprink! I'm writing this comment based only on what I remember from reading the chapter last Monday, so I might not remember everything. I loved Audrey II's lines, and her saying "who's the beefcake" reminded me of when Hedda said in Wilderness, "who's the fruitcake" when she saw Wayne. XD I also really liked Doyce and Tsuyoshi's interactions... one of the funniest parts of the chapter in my opinion was Doyce wondering if Tsuyoshi was gay in the confessional, as if it was some huge secret. XD Autumn is a little more saucy this time around... good for her! Being involved in the fashion world will probably do that to you. Lastly, I really liked Zane this time around. It seems like Alexandria may have met her match in him. I'm really excited for the rest of the story! Except the eliminations. I like everyone, so every week is gonna be slightly painful for me. XD Except maybe when Eduardo is eliminated. I like him, but I won't be sad. Sorry Eddy. :P -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 01:20, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'll have to make it sad, just to spite you... That is... if it happens. :P It should be a good season, I mean, I hope so. I want to keep everyone around. >_< I'm glad most people liked Doyce and Tsu. Sorry that Doyce seems like a screenhog, but he was brought out early in both first chapters he was in, mostly becuase I thought of a lot of jokes that centered around him. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:57, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hurrah, Irene got out. xD Nothing against her, but I'm glad Dante was safe, and everytime I hear her name it reminds me of the hurricane... xD Talking to the girl with the broken smile... ^{Asking if she'd like} _{to stay a while, yeah...} 18:34, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I was thinking of giving her a new theme song, 'Rock You Like a Hurricane'. :P It wasn't easy for me to decide on who to cut first, but... Yeah, it had to be Irene. Thanks for the comment. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:36, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I knew it! Before I read this chapter, I had a sneaky suspicion that either Irene or Stevie would be eliminated first. Poor Irene. I too find it funny that she came in second place the first time around without actually being there, and ended up getting eliminated first this time around. I loved the costume choices... my personal favorites were the ones that weren't described in great detail, but sounded funny (Autumn as a potted plant, Audrey II as a fish tank, Yesenia as a hamburger). I loved Vanessa and Tsuyoshi this chapter, both individually and when they were together. I also really like both the team names.. especially the Super Muscle Buff Dudes. Raging Ocelots isn't an awful name in my opinion, but that's just because I think ocelots are cute. :3 So, I look forward to next week's chapter. -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 18:37, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, second chapter! But I still don't understand what the challenge was about, how was the winner chosen?Also XD at the question for Yesenia. I was hoping Stevie would be eliminated as he is the only character in this story I don't like, Irene wasn't one of my favourite this time (although she was in TDR) but i still liked her. Let Manatee laugh at the cool 19:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, I loved the new chapter! The challenge was pretty interesting. I wanna see pictures of the characters in their costumes for some reason. XD The Super Muscle Buff Dudes is like the best team name ever. :P The Raging Ocelots is cool too. Like Lalainee said, ocelots are cute. Irene first out was kinda sad, but she got 2nd last time, and I was kind of expecting it. Great chapter. Crash into the sun! Like a boss! Now I'm dead! Like a boss! 19:41, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting chapter. I have a bad feeling that Nolan's going to end up doing a bad job as host. An example is him not remembering what to do at the beginning. We'll see what happens. Stinks about Irene. I was hoping for her to get a little farther but not as far as in Reality. I'm not sure who I want to go next but I'll just read along as this continues. Keep it up Sprink! Oweguy Wanted a new sig So he changed it 20:21, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. Manatee, Nolan decided the winners by how well they answered the questions. Stevie and Irene screwed up pretty royally. I changed the part about Doyce saying that he didn't mind Tsuyoshi ogling him, since it didn't flow with where he says he knew Tsuyoshi was gay. The earlier comments wouldn't leave any doubt in his mind. As for the team names... Thanks. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome challenge. I loved all the questions, specially the ones for Alexandria. Sprink, why is she so hot? xD Nolan is a really awesome host. I'm sad with the elimination. Why Irene? She's my 2nd favorite (Alexandria is the 1st). D,: But I knew this season would be really sad in the eliminations, I pretty much like almost everyone in the season (except Nathan). But it's okay, as longer as Alex make it far. BTW, I love Nolan as a host. Nolan, you are a amazing host. And I wanna see Missy and Alex in their costumes. :3 Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 04:23, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. Sorry about Irene, but I'm glad that you're supporting the new host. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 15:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Aww... Poor Irene. I feel bad that Tsuyoshi and Dante are enemies. I like Dante a lot, so I'm glad he didn't go. Also, that would've been a little predictable, which would've made it unpredictable. Inception. O_O. I have to say honestly Doyce is the only character you've ever made that actually makes me crack up laughing when I'm sitting in a room alone. Because of Hurricane Irene (irony), I had to go to a cafe with free wi-fi to read this chapter. When Doyce yelled "I knew it!" during the press conference, I started laughing really hard and one guy stared at me really strangely. XD. Can't wait for the next chapter!--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 21:26, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

That makes me feel that I've accomplished something as an author when I cause someone to get a strange look from a stranger. 8D Thanks for the comment, and thanks for reading. I'm glad you like Dante, and sorry about Irene. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:34, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I really loved the first and second chapter... I read your past stories (to catch up) and found them quite intriguing... I really love Alexandria and was upset to see "iRene" (now Irene) go.--You can call me Taters! 17:01, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Thaks, Goldin. I appreciate new readers. I hope you like the rest of the story, and sorry about Irene. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:59, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Are you going to have a final 3 guessing contest?TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 05:32, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but I usually start those a little later on. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Somehow, at the beginning of the chapter I thought, "Willow's probably going to be eliminated." XD I honestly have no idea how I called that. I don't care that much. I'd say Willow was the only contestant that I didn't like. I love the rest of the cast. I expected Stevie to revert to his old self sometime during the competition, but I didn't realize it would be so early. Now, what will happen? D: Also, I'm surprised by the Tsuyoshi and Nathan thing. I don't oppose the friendship, but it's not one of my favorite interactions. And wow, Zane's putting the moves on everyone. First, Alexandria and then Willow. I hope Zane and Alexandria get together! That would be epic! Cna't wait for the next chapter! :D--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Radi. I didn't think it was too predictable, well... Since I didn't even decide who to eliminate until I was nearly done with the chapter. >_> But, sorry about the Tsu-Nathan thing. It was planned for a little while, now. Plus, I figured no one would think Stevie would revert so early, I wanted that to be a little unpredictable. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Eduardo and the rejected Dante remind me of Eduardo and Nolan in Total Drama Wilderness, but I guess that's what you want. And I loved Audrey this chapter, the kitty belt part, she trying to remember Willow and admitting to read yaoi. As for Willow's elimination... she was the only character in this story that I felt completely neutral about, if someone had to go, I'm glad it was her. Let Manatee laugh at the cool 21:21, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Really good chapter. I'm loving Audrey II more and more, she epic hilarious. I never thought Stevie would turn to the old Stevie so early. Tsuyoshi and Nathan, I didn't expected that. I don't have a opinion formed about this friendship. I thought that Zane would be eliminated, IDK why. I though Missy was changed, but she's still evil. That's the Missy that I love. I wonder if Joanna is crazy, but she's hilarious. I'm not sad with the elimination. Willow was my 3rd least-favorite in this season. I'm neutral about her. But her cry-jokes was hilarious. LOL at the end, with Alexandria with a umbrella saying that she expected a waterfall. xD That's why Alexandria is my favorite. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 22:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Good chapter, although please try to balance the screentime more.TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 22:40, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no! Not Willow! T_T I'm devastated to see her go. As her self-proclaimed biggest fan, I was really hoping she'd do well this time. Oh, well. I'm glad Stevie to the one we all know and love! His victory over Zane and Willow was pretty epic. I really liked the Tsuyoshi and Nathan interactions, since I've always found the two to be fairly similar. Hopefully Nathan will be less pathetic from here on. I'm glad Missy realized that she'll have to try something different in order to get far this time around. I, personally would love to see she and Autumn face off later in the game. Lastly, I loved Audrey II this chapter! I like her so much more than I did in Tropics, and I liked her back then! She's emerging as one of my favorites. Even though this was the first in what I expect to be a series of devastating eliminations, I look forward to next week's chapter. I'll miss you Willow! -cries- XD -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 22:56, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lalaniee, when it comes to Willow fans, i'm pretty sure your second to me. Willow<333333333333.TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 23:27, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. I wish I could could master the art of balancing screentime, but that is hugely difficult... I'm glad people liked Audrey II. She had some believably O_O moments. I was going to have someone shield Stevie's ears, or something like that, so he wouldn't have to hear an explanation on what yaoi is. Sorry to you Willow lovers, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:45, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sprink, it would help if you transfered some of Tsyoshi's and Dante's spotlight to say, Yesnia..TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 00:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you see, there's some more major storylines. I have to have ideas for a character to write for them. I will try to include Yesenia better, as I recognize that I've been neglecting her a little. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

I completely expected Zane to start dating Willow this chapter, I mean really they were connecting. Also is it me or is Stevie so much better as the Challenge king, however, I feel the transferance from Hippieish to Dominator is quick. All in all good chapter.--Kenzen - Talk - Edits 21:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I appreciate that you read and commented, Kenny. :) I think the transition was fast, but, well... you know. XD I have to spread plot points out. When someone is being something they're not, it generally can be revealed fairly quickly. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:17, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sweet chapter, bro. I especially enjoyed Nolan, this chapter. I'm really liking him as host! The cast in generally was pretty good, this week. I'm surprise that Nathan is out, already. But hey, as you can probably guess, I won't be losing too many hours of sleep over Nathan. I will admit that I was pretty sure that Eduardo would be the one to go, once I saw him in the bottom two. Though, I couldn't really figure why, other than being friends with Dante. Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Mist of Sprinkles. TDIwriter^{Ruining everyone's fun since 2009!} 17:57, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

That chapter felt... short, but good anyway. I wasn't expecting Nathan to go though, I didn't wanted him eliminated so early, but at least he is happy now. Let Manatee laugh at the cool 18:26, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nice chapter, Sprink. Like TDIwriter said, the entire cast was pretty good this week. I feel like you did a good job at giving everyone something to do or say this time around. As usual, I enjoyed anything that had to do with Audrey II, especially her 'woof' comment when Dante took his shirt off. I've always enjoyed that boy-crazy aspect of her. XD I thought Eduardo would be going home when I saw the bottom two, but I also saw the logic in Nathan going home. He ended up being a two-time early out. Oh well! I guess I'd rather see him go home over a lot of my other favorites. Lastly, I think Tsuyoshi is being a little overly sensitive and assumptive about everything Dante says. The comment of his that annoyed me the most was the "you think all gay guys say bff" thing. Dante's comment seemed totally innocent and Tsuyoshi's reply probably made things really uncomfortable. I wonder if and when Tsuyoshi will stop hounding Dante all the time. -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 19:39, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. Manatee, I think it might have been short, since I rushed it, a little, and had a little bit of moments where I wasn't sure what to write, but I like the result, anyway. I'm pretty surprised that most of you thought Nathan would stay. IDK why I'm surprised. TDIwriter, I'm glad you like Nolan as host. I do, too, and I feel like he's best in that role, as opposed to competing. I'm getting to the point where he's host host and settling in, a little more. Lalainee, Tsu's comment was meant to be uncalled for, though originally I wrote the scene with Dante referring to Nathan as Tsu's boyfriend, and I thought that was slightly harsh on Dante's part, though he wouldn't have meant it in a rude/derogatory way. That way, the scene didn't feel right. Tsuyoshi comes from a different angle, where he just does not want to accept Dante for what he did to his friend, Sebastian. Tsu was never meant to be Mr. Perfect when it comes to dealing with people. He had lots of issues with others on his season, and it's been tough for him to even consider that Dante has changed this season. I'm glad you feel like I incorporated everyone the bes I could, though, whoever said that. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:07, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I liked this chapter a lot. Nathan's elimination was both shocking and satisfactory. Not that I don't like Nathan, but there wasn't much to him besides what was already covered. And also, i don't want Eduardo eliminated because he's the only one supporting Dante. Speaking of Dante, I didn't notice until this chapter that Tsuyoshi was being really unfair to Dante. At first I kinda thought it was understandable because of what Dante had done, but now I realize that he was just being completely rude to him. But I love Tsuyoshi anyway. XD So I'm glad that Stevie mentioned how people treated him during his season, because I had been thinking the same thing earlier in the chapter. I also loved the challenge because of Nolan. XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:29, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Radi. Tsuyoshi was going to be slightly more extreme with Dante than he actually has been. It was going to be more reminiscent of how he was treated by Cary. I am glad, though, that you got the connection before it was stated. I'm also glad you liked the challenge. I have no idea how I thought of it. XD I just thought that repairing a fence would be a good idea. o_O Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah. And if Eduardo were eliminated, it would have been partly because he kind of lost the challenge for his team, due to his extreme strength. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:17, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I loved the chapter. I love Nolan as a host. Miss Johanson is awesome too. The challenge was really epic. I'm starting to like Autumn and Eduardo more. The same with Nathan, but he was eliminated. Alexandria and Zane reminds me of Alexandria and Evan in TDAthletics (as I wanted/want both of these friendships to be a relationship xD). I love Tsuyoshi, but I hated him in this chaspter. He's being so unfair to Dante. I know everything he did in TDT, he was mean and used my favorite TDT character, but he changed, and I support him. I really want to see more of Prisicilla and Missy. They were awesome antagonists, but they are just quiet now. Well, Missy had some lines in the previous chapter, but Priscilla just had a few lines as of now. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 03:48, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. I'm glad that you liked all that stuff, and I'll try to include those characters some more. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Pricilla got the earlly bot, that was surprising to say the least. Good bikini chapter :)--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 17:58, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked the bikini chapter. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:50, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Epic chapter, bro. And I'm totally not just saying that because it was slightly heavy with my homeboy, Mick Dizzle. I'm slightly saddened that Priscilla is gone so early, as she was my second favorite TDReality contestant...but then again, all of my top favorites, Zane, The Mick Deester, Brad, and Doyce, are still in. I'm liking Brad's alliance, right now. And, it's interesting to see Zane and Micky D. interact, as I like when my favorites interact. Zane is still awesome, as always. I can't wait for more Zalexandria. (That's their pseudo-couple name. I have said it, so it must be canon. To me, at least). I would say that I can't wait for next week, but I know the time will come when I lose one of my top favorites. Out of them...I think Brad or Doyce will be out, first. Brandon the Egomaniac^{Your lips are venomous poison} 18:56, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, bro. I'm glad you liked this one, and I felt it had some good moments. I hope it did, anyway. I'm glad to finally incorporate MD some more, and I feel like I almost got some good moments for everyone in there. But according to TAU, I think I missed on Autumn. D'oh! Sorry about Priscilla, though. I'm glad the story has your support. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I was expecting (and hoping for) Micky D. to go, but Priscilla's wasn't that bad of an elimination. I was hoping for some interaction between her and Vanessa since Vanessa said something about being her fan (or something like that) in Athletics. And, am I the only one who thoght of the Epic Rap Battles of Wiki when read the Audrey's 'OMG, so cute' line? Let Manatee laugh at the cool 19:02, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Now that I think about it...I don't remember Autumn in this chapter, that much. But how could I? She doesn't rap, hit on hot chicks, shout her own name, and she isn't Brad. Brandon the TDIwriter^{See wut I did thar?} 19:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot to comment on how I liked Audrey randomly remembering Willow.Let Manatee laugh at the cool 19:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Manatee. Consider it self horn tooting, but I also enjoyed Audrey's random remembrance of Willow several chapters after her elimination. TDIwriter, Autumn actually is Brad... Aw. man. I spoiled the whole twist. D: Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:11, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yay. Dante and Tsuyoshi are friends. This is both happy and kind of annoying at the same time. There pretty much my two favorite characters, so I'm glad that they get along, but at the same time, there's a seemingly lack of conflict now. I want war! XD Nonetheless, it was a great chapter. I expected either Priscilla or Micky D to be eliminated, and I obviously prefer Priscilla to be eliminated out of those two. I have a weird feeling Tsuyoshi might make it really far again, despite already winning. Hopefully I'm right. Loved the name of the episode btw. XD And I'm still rooting for Zane and Alexandria!--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't commented on your stories for a while but I figured I should just to let you know I'm still reading. I like the title of the episode. It's funny. I wasn't too upset about Priscilla's elimination because she'd gotten far in TDReality. Still she had a good run. Can't wait for next chapter. Oweguy Wanted a new sig So he changed it 19:48, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

This is Sprink not logged on. Thanks, guys. I'm glad you like the chapter title, since it's what I always refer to manga or anime episodes that feature a trip to the beach as. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and Radical, can't we all just get along? XD

Not on Total Drama. :P XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:06, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I really liked this chapter! I'm sorry I haven't commented, but rest assured, I do read this. Anyway, I'm loving the Yesenia/Nolan friendship. I think it's awesome, and I wasn't talking about Doyce there. Speaking of Doyce, I'm liking him a bit more than last time.

I'm also really glad that Tsuyoshi stopped judging Dante so much. It was really getting on my nerves with how we was treating him. And is it just me? Or does Tsu seem attracted to Dante? *shrugs*

And yay! Autumn's still in! I love being able to read for her again, and she seems to be doing slightly better. She's already talked more than her last appearance! And Joanna is still being hilarious, in a more motherly way this time.

I'll end the comment by saying that I'm loving Nolan being the host. He was epic, and epic is always good. Goldenshane 20:31, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I haven't really commented but I've been really enjoying the story even without Irene. I think that Alexandria, Autumn, Joanna, Audrey, Sebastian, and Dante are probably my favorites. As for Tsuyoshi, I would probably like him more but I don't feel like your giving him fair screen time. I guess I just want more of some of the other characters but besides that it's been pretty good! --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 20:33, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys/lurkers. I realize that Tsuyoshi gets a lot of airtime, but I feel that A. it's part of his personality and B. he has interesting plots going on, atm and C. I thought this chapter was a little more balanced. Shane, I'm also glad you like the stuff you like. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:51, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It was more balanced, I just said that to put it out there. :P --HINT:A AWESOME USER,that loves Chatango and Chatting but wonders,what's with Cyan? 20:53, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think people are wary that Tsu might get the Duncan treatment, y'knowaddamean? TDIwriter^{If you can read this, read it again.} 20:54, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I can see that. I'll try to balance it better, but I do have certain plots for certain characters, and it's hard to force everything that happens with a character in one chapter. It needs to be spread out, a little. (and yeah, other people have mentioned it. IDK how to fix it at this point. :P) I hope that he isn't Duncany, at least in personality. :P He won'te be back for a third season, if that's any comfort. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:05, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice chapter, Sprink! It was probably my favorite one so far. I think this was a good chapter for the girls, who I feel are sometimes put on the back burner in your stories. No offense, of course. But yeah, I feel like all of the girls had something funny to do or say for once! I loved Missy's line about Priscilla being only an operation away from being a man, Audrey II randomly remembering Willow, Vanessa's pamphlet, Priscilla's threats to Zane (especially the one about wearing a ski mask in a parking lot XDDD), and Alexandria in general. I didn't just like the girls, though. I'm glad that Tsuyoshi and Dante have seemingly patched things up. Poor Tsuyoshi can barely contain himself with all of the guys he finds attractive this season. XD I also enjoyed the creation of the Brad-Sebastian-Zane-Yesenia alliance, which should be very interesting. As long as they don't vote out Missy. XD I love how she's been acting recently! -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 21:27, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also, I thought the chapter title ironic because most of the girls don't even wear bikinis. XD -Lalainee^{SUBLIMINAL MESSAGE HERE} 21:30, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I also would like to add, tone down Autumn a little she is so major with a line after every other person, Hazah! If you can't tell yet I am joking... please tell me you could tell?--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 22:13, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lalainee. I guess this was a good chapter for the girls, but I was really trying to focus on everyone a bit. Tsu was originally going to be attracted to far more characters, but I didn't want to go too overkill... It's only been Doyce and Stevie... and Nathan... and Dante... um, so far. At least he's not too restrictive in his 'type'. XD It's funny that everyone likes the title, since it's, like, the first time I didn't do a pun/reference as a title. XD When I told you the other day that I had an Audrey II joke planned that I thought you'd like, it was the remembrance of Willow. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:17, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I just noticed your comment, Kenny. Oh. I'll try. Oh... You were joking... Um... I knew that. I'll just switch her out for Tsuyoshi in later scenes. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

You better! xD--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 23:18, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Also, since I am lazy double message time, I expect Tsu-yoshi to be out soon, as well as Doyce--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 23:19, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Why Prisiclla? :( Brad, I oficially hate you now. I was waiting more of her this season. I was expecting someone hat I don't like being eliminated this time *cough*Eduardo*cough. I would love to see Eduardo being voted off next, and Alexandria winning. *bribes Sprink with 100 bucks* xD Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 00:44, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sprink Not Logged In - Sorry, Bruno. You can't expect your least favorite to go every time, but... I like a 100 bucks. 8D

Now I know how an Owen fan that supports Owen's screen hogging feels when people hate on Owen. I think I'm the only one who likes Tsuyoshi being in the spotlight I would love to see Tsuyoshi getting Duncan treatment, as long as he doesn't win again. (useless comment is useless)Let Manatee laugh at the cool 19:20, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Nah. I appreciate knowing that someone doesn't mind. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:34, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Do you know what made me happy? Alexandria has more votes in the pool. :) Alexandria rules. xD Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 23:37, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

That was the best chapter since the first one (if not better). Stevie finally isn't all hairy and slightly disgusting anymore (loved the line about the weed whacker by the way). And I can't wait to see who sent that note to Tsuyoshi. Well, Zane said that is heterossexual after that incident back on Boney Island, and Sebastian already knew him before television, so that ones aren't suspects anymore. Although I was hoping a TsuBastian shipping, they would be so cute together *-*... *Akward cough*... yeah, I shouldn' have said that, now I look like a yaoi fan girl. Let Manatee laugh at the cool 19:05, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

:D Tsuyoshi's got an admirer! This is amazing! Although, it might be a girl, which would explain why he threw it out, but whatever. I'm glad Eduardo and Alexandria are just friends, because that means that Alexandria and Zane can still happen! Plus, I hate how everyone's acting toward Micky D, forcing him to change and stuff. Micky D's supposed to be a gangsta, yo. XD I want more chapters! NOW! (please...)--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:10, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you guys liked the chapter so much. Tsuyoshi threw out the note, though, because the sender apparently didn't show up. The stuff with Micky D. was just out of wanting to win the challenge by having a pretty extreme makeover. You'll have to wait for the next chapter, though, Radical. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:19, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sweet chapter, bro. I love the part about Micky D., and then that one scene where Micky D. was all like, "Yo" and "Dawg" and "Brandon is the coolest fan eva". That part was totally there, in case anyone missed it. I promise it was. Anyway, I was pretty sure it would be Eduardo, even before I read the chapter. It just seemed like his time. I'm not to bothered by that, Eduardo was pretty low on my list. And, Stevie has reigned victorious in the Eduardo-Stevie debate. I had my money on Stevie, from that start. I felt bad, for Mac Daddy, y'know? He seems so scared, and confused by his own self image. I love that he's getting development, though, instead of being solely comic relief. TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 20:26, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked the development with Micky D. You'll have to see if it goes anywhere. You got the subliminal message about Brandon being the coolest fan eva, but it was for another Brandon. Sorry about the misunderstanding. XD Thanks for reading and liking the chapter. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:30, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Another Brandon? Bro...I thought we were bros. XD TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 20:32, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

We are bros, bro. I was just playing around, like bros do. The nonexistant subliminal message was totally for you. ;D I plan to make makeover images, btw, if anyone was wondering, but I haven't as of yet. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:36, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Bro, you totally bro'd me, on that one. Well played. I was wondering about that. I've been trying to picture what Mac Dilly Dally (I've been calling him that since he took so long in that diving challenge) would look like, but so far all efforts have proved fruitless. TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 20:42, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I have the picture of him in my mind, so hopefully it translates when I edit his cast pic. I'll try to work on both pics, tonight. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:44, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Another great chapter! I love makeover challenges. XD As usual, I loved Aurdrey II! She's so boy-crazy, and I love it! It's hilarious. My favorite moments of hers were "Unbuttoned!" Audrey shouts, and "Who can forget that outfit during the diving challenge?" Audrey II adds. "I'm getting all sweaty just thinking about it."XDD I'm also excited to see that Missy helped orchestrate Priscilla's elimination... she's baaaack! XD We'll see how her new strategy will work for her. I also really liked Autumn, and Tsuyoshi and Dante's interactions. They make pretty good unlikely friends! Sebastian won't be thrilled about that, I imagine. I'm so excited to see the makeover pictures! Especially Stevie's. I can't even imagine what he must look like. Lastly, I'm not too upset about Eduardo leaving. He was probably one of my least favorites, not that I dislike him. If you keep eliminating my non-favorites, I'll be happy all season! XD -Lalainee^{Otherwise known as Liluokalani.} 21:44, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lalainee. I hope to get those pics done soonish. I figured you'd like Audrey. :P Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:48, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Loved the chapter. :) It was really great chapter. Audrey II is so freaking hilarious. I'm glad that everybody forgave Dante. Except Audrey and Sebastian, but I understand those. I'm so happy: the only three characters that I didn't liked has gone (Eduardo, Nathan and Willow). Now it's will be hard to see anyone leave. xD I was shiping AlexandriaXEduardo. Alexandria has the most shipings in the story of this wikia. xD But I prefer AlexandriaXEvan (with maye won't happen), AlexandriaXDoyce and AlexandriaXZane and AlexandriaXMe. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 05:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria does have a lot of ships, doesn't she? XD Thanks for reading and for the comment, Bruno. I'm glad you like Audrey II, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 13:52, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I must say that I'm very surprised by Eddy's elimination. I would've thought that they would keep him for muscle. Of course, there could be other reasons.

And Tsuyoshi's about to have a boyfriend? Well, it feels a little uncomfortable to read that, but I'm sure I'll get over it. Either way, I'm interested to see who it is. My guess is Doyce, although he claims to have had quite a few girlfriends. I think it's him, but we'll see. It could freaking be Vanessa for all we know!

Anyway, Alexandria's really growing on me. It was cool seeing her put down some walls and talk with Eddy. (The jumprope thing was hilarious) I hope she continues to, as I'm thinking that the sassy part's just a facade. We'll see though, we'll see.

And Autumn finds romance! XD, I loved that part. It showed that Autumn's still very self-conscience and shy about herself. That's why she was so endearing to me. Audrey, you're just hilarious. Keep being you.

"...Did I have a choice?" Not really, but still, keep being yourself! Goldenshane 14:17, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Shane. You'll have to wait and see about Tsuyoshi. I thought you always liked Alexandria? XD I'm glad that Autumn and Audrey are doin' it for you, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 14:24, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I always did. I'm just liking her even more. Goldenshane 15:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, that's fine by me. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 15:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hahahaha, Stevie kind of looks like Matt LeBlanc. As for Micky D., he sure does look different. His jeans are cool. Oh, I forgot to mention that I approve of the "Just don't touch the soul patch" line. Soul patches are not to be messed with. --TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 19:41, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting on the pics. They're both pretty extreme, I'd say. I like Stevie's picture better, but that's just because I'm glad that I at least think he turned out good looking. Micky D... All that mattered with him is that he looks more like an average guy, than he usually does. So I think I accomplished that in the limited way I could (using preexisting clothes). Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:46, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Is it bad how much I drasticcly mis hairy Stevie. Since I don't remember commenting, Good Chapter, I am assuming Tsu-yoshi's admirerer wasn't Ed. Also, I liked Ed he will be missed.--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 19:55, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanksn for the comment, Ken. You can always look at hairy Stevie whenever you want. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:31, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

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In Rememberance.--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 20:46, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Stevie looks like Matt Leblanc. I'm imagining him saying "How you doing?" in a Joey reference. xD Micky D. is totally different. He's very unrecognizable. O_o Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 00:56, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

That's what TDIwriter said, Bruno. XD I agree, though. I myself had no I dea what was under that beard. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:00, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

I never thought I would say that, but Stevie actually looks b-b-b-*pukes a little* beautiful. As for Micky D., he sure looks... Normal. Ah, how I love those makeover challenges! --Let Manatee laugh at the cool 21:46, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Manatee. That means I accomplished my goal. XD I can't believe that I actually succeeded in making Stevie beautiful. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:50, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

WOW, Yesenia disquialifed. Shocked, and sad, and a major event.

Thanks for the comment, Fame Flame. I guess I'm glad your shocked. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:37, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, Yesenia joins Sheena and Nathan in the "I'm Not Good At This Game" club. I really liked Brad, in this chapter. like, how he was concerned about being selfish. Apparently, part of his old facade has become a reality, for him. Personally, I don't think he was really being selfish. He did have a lot to do with the previous win. Zane was awesome, in this chapter, per usual. Doyce was doycerific. I also enjoyed Joanna and her naughty mat. Sebastian was actually pretty enjoyable, this time. I like his confessional, about the other team osticizing Dante by making him stay on a mat of some sort. I think my favorite quote was Brad's, "Can we legally be here?" line. As for Micky D....I let out a "Micky, nooooooo!" when he asked to be refered to by his real name. I did enjoy him, as always, and he still stands as my all-time favorite. I do enjoy the development he is getting, but I will always call him Micky D. Great chapter, bro! --TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 21:44, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I was expecting Yesenia's elimination to be like that, but not THAT early. Dante's blindness was hilarious (I shouldn't be laughing at this), especially the part he pointed to Missy. I didn't like old Micky D. but for some reason I want him to return to his old self. Doyce was hilarious this episode too, but I didn't understood why Brad asked if he was being selfish, I can't remember him being.--I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve! 22:12, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys. You'll need to see what happens with Micky D. (since you both commented on him) XD I'm glad you liked the chapter, and everything, too. Manatee, Brad was being a little overcritical with himself. He doesn't want to be how he was, so any time he feels he's 'reverting' gives him reason for concern. And TDIwriter... You actually liked Sebastian, for once? XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:32, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I was surprised, too XD --TDIwriter^{Oops, is my ego showing?} 22:37, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

- This chapter rawked. First of all, Zane was hilarious throughout... my favorite moment of his was when he said "Hold that pose. This is really hot" after Alex got hit with the gross grasshopper goo. XD I also really liked Joanna and Dante, both individually and when they were interacting with each other. The two of them make a good comedic duo. I was amused by Dante's reaction to 'the naughty mat'. XD I liked Autumn as well, even though she didn't talk a ton. Her personality is shining through despite the fact that she's not super chatty. I actually kind of enjoyed Sebastian too, which is different because he hasn't really grabbed my attention the last few chapters. I liked his interactions with Vanessa, especially. Doyce was funny as usual, and I'm intrigued by what's going on with Brad. As for Yesenia's elimination, I'm surprised but not upset. Another safe week without losing anyone of my favorites! :D Lastly, I'll just give a quick shoutout to the group I'm now calling 'Mai Girlz': Vanessa, Missy, Alexandria, and Audrey II. You know how I feel about them, so it goes without saying that I enjoyed them this chapter. Nice work! Oh, and as for the "I'm Not Good At This Game Club"... don't forget Daniel. XD ---Lalainee^{Otherwise known as Liluokalani.} 22:45, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. This chapter was epic. Is it just me or was it really long? XD I don't know if Micky D's disappearance was a cliffhanger or just a little add-on at the end though. I'm guessing cliffhanger. *shrugs* Although a couple chapters back I said I missed the Tsuyoshi-Dante conflict, I am loving the Sebastian-Dante conflict. I think it actually works better. I think Yesnia's somewhat early elimination was kinda expected, but that's okay, because now I get to see more of my favorites. Plus, the way she was eliminated was definitely shocking, and it showed that Dante still has a tiny bit of his ways left in him. Also, Micky D better go back to normal now. XD I dislike Mackenzie :P I'm still waiting for SnarkShipping to become canon though. :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 23:00, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. I found a lot of people funny this time, Lal. I think everyone has some ability to have a funny moment, it's my fault for not capitalizing on them. XD I'm glad I got a surprising reason for elimination, for once. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:05, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

God, I just read it today. I can't believe it. O_o Well, I actually enjoyed the chapter. Sebastian is one of my faves, but he's being a little harsh with Dante. I can understand why, tough. I loved Joanna and Dante in this chapter, she's really funny. I'm actually liking Autumn more. She wasn't one of my faves, but she's a really good character, without talk to much (like PJ xD). I loved Vanessa and Stevie moments, aswell as Audrey and Stevie. My favorites parts are Alex and Zane. They would be a awesome couple: they are hilarious, and cute together. Layla, I have 'Mai Girlz' too: Alexandria, Missy, Audrey II and Vanessa. Priscilla and Irene was one of they, but they are eliminated. xD The elimination was actually shocking. I never thought it would happen. I thought Yesenia would make it far. At least, it wasn't one of my faves. Bruno! Talk! Editcount! 14:46, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. I'm glad you both read, liked, and were surprised by the chapter. I'm aslo glad you found some stuff funny, and I hope to bring more of that. Thanks for commenting, too. It helps to know what people think of the chapter. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:17, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

MISSY. IS. BACK! She is now officially the best antagonist ever. I'm not saying that I approve of her strategies, but they make stuff fun. I mean, messing with Tsuyoshi, Brad, and Sebastian. In the same chapter! I probably feel the most bad for Tsuyoshi though. I really wanted him to be with somebody, although I must say I'm glad it isn't Doyce. :P I feel bad that Brad is gone, but I think his story is done. Although it is probably the first elimination where I actually felt the story lost an important factor, but that's because only my favorites are left. And considering we haven't reached the merge, that's saying something. I also found this chapter especially funny. Nolan's commentary on the stories was funny. XD I can't wait for the next chapter.--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 23:27, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chat 2

Really good chapter, bro. I enjoyed the reference to Fractured Fairytales. Other things I like include the talk oflotion and pecs, and the Team Brandon vs. Team Dylan lines, as well as the satyr talk. I'm glad that Micky D. is back to being Micky D., and I'm proud that he wants to be true to himself. I do feel bad that he an d Naomi are growing apart, I really liked them as a couple. I'll miss Brad, but I was right about my first favorite going home being either him or Doyce. So that's good. Things are really starting to pick up! I look forward to next week's chapter, as always! --TDIwriter^{Rock and roll angels bring thyn hard rock hallelujah!} 23:49, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, bro. I did make a lot of references to you, but the pec lotion was actually based on something disturbing that happened to a friend of mine, though maybe I thought of Brod (the Bod?) after writing it. I didn't quite remember if he mentioned that, though. Also, I'm not trying to compete with you in chapter length, or anything. This one just ended up getting pretty long. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:56, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Wow... Missy was rather underhand. But I admire that in a strategist. I would've thought that the "greatest player ever" would've been a bit harder to manipulate as well, but we all have our weaknesses. Any who, I am loving Missy. I do think that she is actually the best player of the game in your canon. She managed to lose last time because people thought she was too nice. But alas, this time, she is playing the social game, but more strategically. You're writing for her amazingly. You can tell she's playing the game, but her "niceness" is rather convincing. I like it! :D

Anyway, I kind of wish Micky D. would make himself happier. I'm not too sure that his rapper persona is him. He even said it himself about Naomi and his rapping career. But. if that is him, then it's him.

And I wish Brad wasn't eliminated. But yet, he had to go... Missy, you've done it again. If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 00:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Shane. It seems you liked it. I do notice that you seem to like Missy, though. I thought you didn't so much. XD I felt bad for Brad, too, but he did have to go at this point. Oh, well. It was fun writing for him, and I look forward to writing him, again, in the reunion/finale/update chapters. No comments on the challenge, so far. I personally really liked it, but, ah well. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I extreamally loved this chapter. It's perhaps my favorite of this season. :D Audrey is so epic: "Please, be his shirt, please, be his shirt." xD I LOLed at that moment. I laughed at the Dylan and Brandon's reference too. Well, the tales where my favorite part of this. The Stevie in Wonderland was hilarious. The Pasty White was really funny too. I liked Stevie in Wonderland better, though. Didn't care for the elimination. I don't like Brad that much. He was my least fave of the remaining contestants. I just loved Missy. Here is the old evil Missy that I loved. I hope she stay longer, making the evil and eliminating everyone. xD What? I love the villains. Don't judge me. xD My name is Bruno! 00:37, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. *judges Bruno* Oh... I didn't see that last part about not judging you. Sorry about that. I'm glad you mentioned the challenge. I liked Stevie in Wonderland, too. I had the idea a while back, when I was thinking of making a Stevie Wonder reference. XD Glad you like Audrey, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you judged me. xD Oh, Stevie wonder FTW. xD *Has a random idea of a character based off of Stevie wonder*. That would be a nice character for your next story. xP For some reason, I thought that Doyce would be eliminated. And bye-bye to my guess in the WGC. xD So, I forgot to comment on two points: I feel really sad about Micky. D. I'm glad that he returned to be Mick D. But I felt sad with his life, and the Naomi thing. And, I have to agree with Shane: Missy is the player in your stories. She played Tsuyoshi, wich I thought that would never being manipulated/played. Missy is now my 2nd favorite, of all your stories. It will be hard to her be my favorite, though. Oh, I think I will do a blog with my rankings of the stories. That's absolutelly a original idea. xD My name is Bruno! 00:57, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, that challenge was long, and cool too, I like Stevie in Wonderland better, but the end of Pasty White was pretty funny, well, the situation was funny not the ending itself. Audrey's "be his shirt" line was hilarious.Brad being eliminated wasn't that bad, he wasn't very interesting in this story. And my prediction about Tsuyoshi's admirer was incorrect, except the part that he was being manipulated. I thought Dante would be the manipulator, and Sebastian would be right about him, since he was wrong about everything in Tropics. --I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 01:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno (for the extra comment) and Manatee. Wow. Missy seemed to really shoot up in popularity in this chapter. I thought of putting Doyce in the bottom two with Brad, but then I figured that Missy would be more likely to be there. Bruno, I hope you do do the rankings blog. I like those. XD Manatee, I'm really glad that you liked the chapter, and challenge, even though it was long. I did think about cutting the challenge shorter, by A. declaring The Super Buff Muscle Dudes the winner without the other team going, or B. having The Super Buff Muscle Dudes end it at the door part and encouraging the viewers to complete it in their minds. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:12, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This chapter was AWESOME, Sprink! First of all, "Mai Girlz" were all awesome this chapter, except maybe Vanessa. She was a little unintentionally mean to Dante. It was unintentional, though, so I forgive her. Audrey II was funny as usual, but I think she might have gotten overtaken by Missy as my favorite. Not only was I pleased by Missy calling Brad out, and by her hilarious role in the play, but I was ELATED to see that she had written the lovenote to Tsuyoshi! THAT'S BRILLIANT! I love Tsu, but he fell for it hook, line and sinker! And if there's one thing I respect, it's brilliant gameplay! Yes, Missy! Now I know for sure I made a wise choice by choosing Missy to return for this season. I am rooting for her 100% (alongs with my other girlz). As for everyone else... I'm glad that Micky D. is back to being Micky D. I think we all like him much better, that way. I think Joanna played a more vocal role than she has been lately, which is good for her! She's the less surviving Wilderness contestant, so it's up to her to represent! This challenge was awesome. It was like two stories within one story. XD I liked Stevie in Wonderland better, so I'm glad that one won. Stevie's lines in general were really funny. Pasty White was really good too. I liked Sebastian's rhymes as the mirror, and the whole references to how stories were politically incorrect in their portrayals of stepmothers and for favoring pale skin. :P I like Brad, but there were a lot of other characters that I liked more than him. Essentially, I'm saying that this was yet another good week for me, in terms of eliminations. I'm sure it'll get harder once it gets down to all of my favorites. I'll miss him, a little. I'm so excited for the rest of this story. Viva la TD:BoB! -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 02:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lal. I apprecciate that you're liking this story, and also the indepth feedback. I think Vanessa's comment was meant to read different, but I can't figure out how to fix it. She was going to say 'typical guy', but then changes the subject by saying 'anyway'. I'm also glad you liked the challenge. I think that both stories were pretty different, but I did end up liking them. I'm surprised no one commented on Micky D.'s raps. I loved the 'as far as friends go' line. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No! First Brad, now Micky D. All the eliminations from now on are going to be depressing. For the record, I figured Alexandria would get the boot, but with Sprink, I probably should have seen a twist coming. :P I have to be honest, I didn't particularly like the challenge. Mostly because I didn't know what the rules were or what was going on. I didn't understand if time was a factor or not, in which case, the teams could've taken all the time in the world. Oh, well. It still gave the contestants a chance for interesting dialogue. I expected Tsuyoshi to warn Sebastian about Missy, but I guess he forgot or something. :P I guess I'll see you next chapter. :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:08, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Tsuyoshi and Sebastian are trying to limit their interaction until the merge. Sorry you didn't like the challenge. I thought I mentioned that time was not the issue, although the more time taken meant that there was more opportunity for Jaanet or Dean to get damaged. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I honestly found this chapter great! The interactions, the comedy, the elimination, I think it's your best yet. I was surprised by Sebastian making a joke, and by Stevie and Vanessa's interaction, and by Micky D. being eliminated (surprised and happy, since I don't like him). I really liked Audrey this chapter too, especially the part where Dean lost his foot, him losing his head was pretty funny too.I liked Doyce's interaction with Alexandria, and Dante's with Tsuyoshi too. And I think we can now say Zane has a fear: Geese. There are many other things I liked, and would mention, like Nolan in the end, but for some reason I don't like to write ridiculously long comments, nothing against your long comments about TDPacific Island, I actually like to read them.--I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:37, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This chapter rocked, Sprink! I was right in my weird feeling that Micky D. would be going home... it sucks! Oh, well. I think his story was about wrapped up. I enjoyed his time on the show, and I think I'd have rather seen him leave than a few other people. Can I just say that I LOVE Stevie x Vanessa? It's so unexpected, yet so great! I with each other, as well as their individual dialogues. really look forward to seeing what comes out of that. I also continue to like Sebastian and Missy's interactions, as well as their own individual dialogues. Those two are great. I was HORRIFED that Audrey II might end up going home if her team had lost on account of her performance in the challenge. The entire time I was reading, I was like, "PleasenotAudreyPleasePleasePlease!" This isn't good. When and if she actually does get the boot, I'm going to be devastated. XD Speaking of Audrey, "Ma Girlz" is still in tact! I thought Alexandria might be out for a second, but she survived. Dante and Tsuyoshi's talk about Dante's homophobia was very interesting. I liked Dante's story a lot. It was sweet, in a way. What else... oh, Joanna was funny as usual. She might not be the main character, but I appreciate the things she does. Zane and Doyce were both great as well... I wonder if a conflict will emerge from their mutual desire for the luscious Alexandria? XD Lastly, Nolan's intro in the beginning was funny, to me. When he was pleading the viewers to keep watching, I thought it'd be really funny if I just stopped reading the chapter right then. Good thing I didn't. :P -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 20:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I'm sure they're annoying, but I find that there is a lot to comment on per chapter with that story, plus I usually type up the comment as I read along. I'm also glad you liked the chapter so much, too. That's always good news. XD Your comment was a good length, too. (This was directed at Manatee) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I'm glad you didn't stop, either, Lal. XD I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the chapter so much.I think Stevessa is pretty cute, but you'll have to wait and see if it goes anywhere. I'm also glad you liked the intro. They're fun to write, and I always assume that people skip the intro's. I was going to save his outro for another intro, but thought it fit, so I went with it.Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:17, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah... I usually skip it. :P Can you blame me? I want to get to the elimination as fast as possible. XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 22:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. Well if you decide to read it, I try for it to be worth it. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:01, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well...I'm sure you knew what to expect, when I posted my comment. It kind of hit like a brick to see Micky D. leave, especially right after Brad. I'll get to that in a moment. I thought the challenge was cool, and I enjoyed the interactions between Stevie and Vanessa. They make a pretty cute couple, I would say, and it's nice to see Vanessa in a positive light. Dude, Tsuyoshi, I can totally sympathize...I pluck my eyebrows as well, Tsu. There is no shame in manscaping. As for Micky, I enjoyed him throughout his run. He's become a much deeper character in my eyes. I think I've mentioned that I kind of enjoy when bad things happen to my favorites, because I know that they have perspective. Micky's story wasn't all bad, I know, but I found it really interesting to see the inner workings of Micky, especially since he was a comic relief character in Reality. I respect him for making such a big decision like that, and I hope he and Naomi patch up the distance between them . All and all, even if Micky isn't the most prominent character in your arsenal, to me he feels like one of the most human, and one of the most likeable. If he wasn't already, his BotB appearance solidified his place as my all time favorite Total Drama character (yes, even above Tyler). I'll miss you, D., keep on keepin' on, yo. Excellent chapter, my friend. --TDIwriter^{We want the funk! Give up the funk!} 23:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, TDIwriter. I'm glad you liked the challenge and Stevie and Vanessa's interactions. I also tweeze my eyebrows, mostly in the middle (yeah, I'd have a monobrow if I didn't care), but they are pretty wild. As for Micky D., I was pretty nervous about how you might react to him being a pretty early exit, but his story was resolved. I didn't want to eliminate him so early, but I didn't want to keep him around for no real lot reason either. I'm glad that you feel so strongly about the guy, and that a character can mean that much to someone. I really appreciate that, bro. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I really do get attached to my favorites, Micky, Beau, Brad, Doyce and Zane. I guess, it's because I can see something resembling myself in each of them. So, it's hard to see them leave sometimes, because it's like watching someone who understands me go away. I don't think 13th is that early of an out...it's kind of the beginning of the middle, the way I see it. I think I'd rather Micky leave on a meaningful note, anyway. But yeah, these characters do mean a lot to me. As for the eyebrow thing, I've never had a unibrow, and my eyebrows aren't out of control it I don't manscape them. I'm just a little vain. --TDIwriter^{We want the funk! Give up the funk!} 00:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, when I manscape mine it doesn't do to good. I have it on my profile picture, but one eyebrow is shaped different from the other around the center of the eyebrow. As for the characters, I like to have deep characters and comedy characters, but I don't mind mixing both together. I plan to put it on his page, but you really did help with his plot, if you don't remember. I'm satisfied with his story this time, and I plan to give you credit for that, since I wasn't sure what I was going to do with him, at first. So thanks, bro. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 00:25, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't commented on this? I thought I did... anyway... not Irene! Not Pricsilla! Not Eduardo! Not Yesenia! Not Brad! Not Micky D! Don't hug me I'm scared

Thanks for te in depth comment, Fan. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I'm late. I wasn't able to read the chapter in the monday or tomorrow. So, I loved the chapter. The challenge was confusing, but enjoyable. I loved StevieXVanessa interactions. She's more likeable this time. Audrey is epically hilarious. I laugh every time with her, specially the "anatomically correct". Audrey, your little perv. xD I love Missy and Sebastian too. Missy is way more evil than she was in BI. Tsuyoshi and Dante is a friendship that I didn't saw coming. I like it, tough. I enjoy the Alexandria-Zane-Doyce interactions. I can see a future triangle between them, but in a Sprink's story, you can expect everything. So, I'm sad with the elimination. Micky D. was awesome. He was more in BotB than the comedy-relief that he was in Reality. However, I prefer seem him leave than Alexandria. My name is Bruno! 13:54, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for all that, Bruno. Wait to see what happens next, is all I can say. XD I'm glad you liked what you liked, too. Thanks for being a faithful reader. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 14:05, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Just read the chapter, bro. It was pretty sweet. I like Stevie and Vanessa as a couple, as it's nice to see Vanessa's softer side. It's interesting to see Stevie in a relationship, too. I'm not sure why...he just kind of seemed like a single dude. I feel bad for Dante, and his future blindness...that's got to be hard, knowing that you won't be able to see one day. I kind of felt bad for Audrey, not knowing that Al was actually breaking up with her. I don't feel that bad, seeing as she oogles other people. The challenge was interesting, though not as epic as...say, an island-y dance thing >.> I enjoyed Doyce a lot in this chapter, as usual. I think I'll start saying "Doyce it up", and "Let's Doyce this" and things of that nature. It kind of sucks, seeing that Tsu and Sebastian's friendship is starting to fail. I don't like Sebastian that much, but I still don't want him to lose his best friend. I'll miss Vanessa, too. Great chapter, bro! TDIwriter^{Nothin' lasts forever, even cold November Rain} 18:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I guess I kinda lied. Vanessa's elimination didn't upset me too much. Don't get me wrong, I love Vanessa, but it's getting hard to choose who I want to go next. Poor Sebastian. And Dante. And Tsuyoshi. In fact, Missy turns out to be the only optimistic one left. Maybe she'll win (Prob not :P). Dante's blindness is sad. I didn't really realize how big of a deal until I imagined it happening to me. Well, at least, you get to learn how to do things easier before you actually go blind. I guess I see now where Sebastian's photographic memory can be a bit of a curse. He's too hung up in the past. I'm guilty of that myself actually. Now that I think about it, most people probably are. Stevie and Vanessa was an unexpected pairing. Not my favorite, but pretty cool, nonetheless. And Doyce was super epic in this challenge. XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:15, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Vanessa and Stevie are officially a couple. I still prefer her with Skylar though, STEVIE CAN GO DIE ALONE! Nah, just kidding he's not that bad. Alexandria talking about Missy's cauldron was pretty funny, and for some reason I laught hard when you mispelled exaggerated as exaggherated. I feel bad for Audrey, but it doesn't seem she's feeling too bad. Im having a hard time deciding if Dante is still evil,I already told you about my theory before, If he still is he is a complete monster, but after hearing about the disease I'm having second thoghts, great work in getting me confused. As for Vanessa's elimination, I like her but she was not that interesting this season, I prefer feminist Vanessa, I'd rather see Stevie leaving instead of her. Btw, loved the Courage the Cowardly dog reference, that's my favorite cartoon of all times. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:24, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Aw Vanessa is entertaining... but Audrey|| actually did something other than be boy crazy! Her boy craziness was funny but it was getting old. I love the Dante, Autumm, Tsyoshi trio. Sorry for not writing an overly-long comment Don't hug me I'm scared

Thanks, guys. :) The Courage reference was random, but I laughed to myself, because he shouted "Stupid cat!" and I reread it and thought of the "You made me look bad!" line from Courage, and it completely applied to the Dante scene, though in a different context from Courage. Manatee, I was like O_O when you were saying that Stevie could go die alone. I know that a lot of people shipper Skynessa, so that makes it challenging to go with another pairing. Muaha, I confused you with Dante. XD IDK if I could deal with losing my eyesight. So much that we do involves sight, so knowing that it's slowly going away and you can't stop it, must be a pretty tough thing... Radical, I'm glad you get that Sebastian's memory is effecting him in this situation. I think that would also be a tough thing to deal with... I do know personally, that change is hard for me to deal with, even with minor things. Sorry that the challenge didn't live up to your view of epicness. I might still do the tropical-y island themed challenge. I'm glad you like those catchphrases, bro. XD Not 'Do you smell what the Doyce is cookin'?' Fan, thanks. I don't mind short comments. Anything is helpful, usually. I'm glad you appreciated Audrey ||. I knew I had to add something for her... and I kind of forgot to include that thing with Al. XD Thanks for the support on the chapter and story, guys. :) Now to fix that exaggherated. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:51, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yayz! Dante's getting at least some better of treatment. Anyway, I hope C-Bass comes around, but he did get hurt, so I understand his unwillingness to forgive Dante. Who knows, maybe there's some truth to what he's saying about Dante and Tsuyoshi. *shrugs*

Audrey II was still epic! She's pretty effective with her storyline about Aspergers, but you're also doing it in a comedic way. So that's just plain epic. And Dante, while I don't want to believe it, just may be playing Tsu and Autumn. I don't think so, but it may be that way, since how everything's going. I don't want to believe it, but it seems that may be a possibility. But he's still my second favorite in the story (after Autumn). Speaking of Autumn, she's epic, but I hope Dante doesn't use her crush like he did with Emmy's. Again, I don't think that'll happen, but it's looking that way. I'll end with Missy being awesome. YAY AWESOMENESS! Oh, and I liked the chapter. If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 20:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I appreciate the comment, and that you liked the chapter, too. You'll have to see if your suspicion is right, I guess. I'm glad you like some of the characters, and you don't hate them all. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:07, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

XD Sorry I haven't commented yet but I have read all the chapters so far and they've been fantastic! But you already know that. I don't know if I like this All Star story more than the last but it is great. I know the TDAthletic characters better so maybe I like it better. I love the couples forming (Stevie x Vanessa is the cutest thing ever! Though Nolan x Yessina is cute too and I like Dante x Autumn or Audrey || and I think Sebastian x Missy would be cute :P) and I really love the humor. Of course your story is going great! Poor Dante D:. If Karma is fair Dante will probably win. Though I prefer Missy. I love her to death! She is so witty. I was so sad to see Vanessa leave. Whenever a couple forms it seems they have to be voted off right after they form D:. Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, come on. I bought KFC. It pretends to be southern, you pretend to be southern. Don't go there! 20:15, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Rhonda. It's good to know you've been reading. I usually try to resist the eliminating a member of a couple after they form since that happened on Total Drama Island, a lot. XD I'm glad you liked the confirmed or unconfirmed couples so far. :) I'm also glad that you're liking the story, too. The first All-Stars I consider one of my best, so that you like this around the same is a good sign, I hope. XD Sorry about Dante, though. It's what I imagined for him, though, and I'm going with it. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:35, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

WAIT! Epic prediction time! Maybe Dante really has changed for the better, but he'll end up betraying them in the end and change back to his old evil self. It's not like Creigh because it wasn't planned. Y'know, like a change of a change of heart. :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:40, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting theory. You'll have to wait and see, Radical. ;) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:44, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice chapter, Sprink! I'm distraught that one of Ma Girlz went home, though. RIP, Vanessa! You may be gone, but you'll never be forgotten! Between her and Audrey, though, I'm glad it ended up being Vanessa. I just love Audrey too much to let her go just yet. Speaking of Audrey, she was great this chapter! Her boy-craziness was funny as always, and her whole dilemma with not knowing that she and Al had broken up was sad yet funny in an "Oh, Audrey" kind of way. :P I personally like Vanessa x Stevie better than Vanessa x Skylar, and I think she and Skylar make better friends than anything else. They're just so cute together. :3 Missy was awesome, too, even though she played kind of a secondary role in this chapter. That's okay. You can't be the main character in every chapter. Sebastian and Tsuyoshi's confrontation was pretty dramatic. I think I'm team Tsuyoshi when it comes to that conflict, especially because Sebastian decided to make it personal with his comments about Tsuyoshi pretending to be something he's not. And now for the main event... Dante pulled an ANTM Cycle 3 Amanda on us! Call me cynical, but for now, I think I'm slightly apprehensive of Dante's sincerity. I don't think he's lying, but I'm not completely sold. Given his track record, I think I have a right to be a little skeptical about it. If it turns out to be true, then that's really sad. If not, Dante's the worst guy evaaar. We'll see about that, I guess. Oh, and I forgot to mention that I enjoyed Alexandria and Zane this chapter. Just throwin' that out there. I can't wait to see who ends up being the last victim before what I think is the merge! -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 22:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'll admit that Amanda is why I know about the disease, but she wasn't exactly why I thought of it. And hey, thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sorry that one of your girls was sent packing. XD It had to happen eventually, ya know. You'll have to wait to see what happens with Dante. I'm glad you like Stevessa (Vanevie?), too. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:03, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Laylay! Now you know how I feel, everytime I lose one of Ma Broz T.T TDIwriter^{Keep the demons down and drag the skeletons out, I got a blind man followin' me in chains} 23:08, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome chapter. I loved the pets day care challenge. :D Stevie X Vanessa kiss was O_o and :D at the same time. I like this pairing more than Skylar X Vanessa, though. Well, I love Alexandria X Zane, since Alexandria X Evan has a little to none chance of happening. Well, I felt bad for Audrey II and the broke-up thing. But she is epically hilarious. xD Poor Dante. I don't think he deserved that much Karma. I always liked him, even in TDT. I think he's telling the truth, and he really changed. Missy still awesome, even though she didn't do much that chapter. Missy is obviously playing Sebastian, but I think Sebastian has a crush on Missy. They would do a cute couple, though. :3 I'm kinda sad that Vanessa's out, but eliminations are kinda hard. I love every remaining competitor. I'm curious to see the nest one, and then, the Merge. I love the Merge. xDMy name is Bruno! 00:45, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. I appreciate your comments. :) I didn't think there was too much funny stuff this chapter, but I guess there was. XD Thanks for the observations, and speculations. I appreciate that stuff, too, to know what the readers are thinking. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:09, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria and Eduardo? Dante and Autumn? Are you just throwing contestants's names into a hat and pulling them out randomly? XD I'm not saying I don't like the couples, I just think they're a bit... random. Anyway, I'm glad Tsuyoshi and Sebastian are still a bit rocky, because that means I get to see more of Missy being manipulative. >:D I hope it all works out in the end though, but not right now. :P Doyce has kinda been a background character, but now... he's still kind of a background character. I noticed him more in this chapter, at least. Well, I'll miss Joanna, but she was kinda creepy in this story. I'm glad the merge is next. :)--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 21:19, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Or is it? Thanks for the comment. Dante and Autumn? Well, they obviously had some moments, and Eduardo and Alexandria had the flirting scene when everyone else was still asleep. And no, everything I'm doing usually has a purpose. You should know that, right? XD My couples aren't usually random, I put a lot of thought into them. As for you liking that Tsuyoshi and Sebastian still have a rocky relationship... well... You're a sick, sick individual. XD Nah, I get what you mean. It's more entertaining for friends not to get along, unless it's a buddy cop movie. SOrry about Doyce seeming like a background character... I never thought I'd say that. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:36, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I completely forgot to comment on Sebastian and Tsuyoshi's conflict, well I hope they get along soon (or at least get along someday), I thought about the possibility of this conflict when I read Tsuyoshi's "After Total Drama" section on his page. I really like Alexandria and Eduardo as a couple, I hope it happens, Zane can go... wait, I've already made that joke once XD. I'm not a fan of AutumnxDante though, and still have my Dante is evil, Sebastian is right theory, although sometimes I question my own theory. That part about Zane poking himself was hilarious. About Joanna's elimination, she wasn't much of a interesting character more of a support one, but I loved what she did with her teammates at the end. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 21:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

I know you put a lot of thought into the couples you make, which is why I'm so surprised at the pairings this season. But if you say thought is going into them too, then I'm sure they'll turn out well. Plus, when I say Doyce is a background character, I mean that he is more centered around ONLY comic relief while in TDAthletics he interacted with people like Holden and Nathan, and stuff. :P In some ways, I kinda prefer it. BTW, buddy cop movies rock. XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 21:41, October 31, 2011 (UTC) {C Great chapter. I loved it. I felt bad for Autumn, and she's growing up to me. But it wasn't Dante's falt. So, I'm not mad at Sebastian. I think he has a reason to be mad at Tsu. I'm not in a team, either, as they are both one of my faves. Idk about Alexandria and Eduardo. I loved the challenge. Joanna was really awesome, and I liked how she were taking care of everyone, like a mother. At least she will be back with her family. Well, I wanted a male to leave, because I like things evened. It's kinda a obsessive-compulsive-thing. xD Before I started to read, I told to myself that Joanna or Stevie would be voted-out in this chapter. O_o I think I'm a psychic. xD My name is Bruno! 21:52, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

This was a lovely chapter, Sprink. I actually forgot there'd be a new chapter today because I didn't know it was Monday due to not having school today. There was a huge snowstorm and now there's branches all over the streets and most buildings and houses have no power (my school included). I'm both surprised and unsurprised that Joanna went home. On the one hand, I thought she'd make it to the merge, where she'd have some sort of plotline and then get voted out. On the other hand, she's been a supporting character the entire time, so I figured she'd be expendable. She's one of those characters that probably isn't meant to be a lead role, but that's okay. She made it halfway and had her little arc ended pretty nicely. Eduardo x Alexandria is cool, I guess, but I feel bad for Zane. I wonder how he'll cope with his feelings of inadequacy going into the merge. I have to say, I found the humor with Dante and Tsuyoshi really funny this chapter. Two of my favorite parts were two scenes that were a little racy: "I just want to make sure nothing falls out" and "I don't think you have anything to be embarassed about". XDD Oh, Dante and Tsuyoshi. Audrey was delightfully clumsy and awkward this chapter, which was funny. As usual, I was worried she'd go home just because of her performance in the challenge, but I'm glad she didn't. I thought the Pepper M.D. thing was funny, for some reason. It was a pretty simple joke, but it stuck with me. :P I lurved Missy as always, especially her interactions with Sebastian. It seems like she's really got a good hold on him. >:) Speaking of Sebastian, it's too bad about his friendship with Tsuyoshi. It seems like Tsuyoshi is really trying to make amends, but Sebastian won't bite. Oh wellz, it'll make for good post-merge drama. We're halfway there! 4 Boney Islanders, 1 Reality Star, 3 Tropical Fish, and 2 Athletic... um... supporters! I'm so excited! -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 22:00, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for these new comments, they're huge. O_O Lal, sorry about your school. I saw you were around earlier, but it took me a while to get this chapter posted. I was pretty worried that everyone would hate on me for not doing Zane and Alexandria as a couple... But... well, you'll see what I have in store. I tried to keep those racy bits at least semi-vague, but they weren't placed there for my amusement. I can tell you that. XD I'm glad you thought the Pepper M.D. thing was enjoyable. I thought of making that more vague, too, but... Meh. I liked it. Yeah, I didn't put too much thought into who from what season would do well, the way I did last time. That's why things are so unbalanced, but at least there's a pattern (1, 2, 3, 4. XD) Bruno, I thought about it not being Stevie in the bottom two, actually. I changed it since I figured people would think a guy was going home. Manatee, you gotta wait and see about Dante being evil or not. XD And thanks for liking the Zane poking himself thing. Haha. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:01, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Was I the only one who had school in the northeast? -_- (This is my last comment on this page today, I swear XD)--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 23:02, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, sorry Radi! I also don't have school tomorrow. XD And don't be sorry, Sprink! I love having no school. Unfortunately, I can't do anything tonight even though it's Halloween because my town is currently a mess, but the mayor said something about how Halloween will be moved to Friday so I can still trick or treat. XD We adjusted a national holiday to fit our own needs! Also, the Halloween party I was supposed to go to last Saturday got ruined by the snow, but will be happening this Saturday instead. All is well. -Lalainee^{Signatures are so mainstream.} 23:07, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Should have commented yesterday... Anyways, I kinda feel bad for Autumn considering Dante has all these traits of evil, I don't think Relastionships work out if your boyfreinds evil. Curse Chapter Six and the connection between Alexandria and Ed starting, though I saw it coming, does a girl ever say 'I like... someone' around/to you and it end up being you. Joanna was expendable this whole season, I am surprised you didn't send her earlier to give Stevia and Vanessa one more chapter together. I actually wondered where Micky D. was to remember he was eliminated... That all I had to say...--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 15:31, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Kenny. I had my reasons for not eliminating Joanna sooner. And, aw, poor, evil Dante. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 18:49, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

You should've done a halloween themed episode. Joanna finally! She was annoying to no end.I can tell the merge is coming soon!(Theres 10 left) Fan has figured out me the sig date and time thing! 20:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I could always do some crazy late merge or no merge. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 04:14, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Autumn left, and she did... Absolutely nothing!? No epic confrontation with Missy, no getting out of the shell?! Nothing?!*returns to normal* Ahem... Good chapter as usual. I loved Nolan this chapter, he was so entertaining. Doyce annoyed me for the first time when he did that with Sebastian in the challenge, I was really hoping he would leave today. By the way you didn't put the chapter title right, It's not the same size as the others and is not showing up on the list. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:14, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

What the heck? Where's my Autumn-Missy conflict? :/ Now I sad. jk. It was still an epic chapter. Dante and Tsuyoshi's romantic getaway is probably going to be awkward, especially since Nolan is tagging along. :P I loved the challenge, especially where Doyce tackles Sebastian. I love that conflict. (BTW, I just read Manatee's comment and I see we both agree :P) I'm glad Doyce didn't go though, because he's pretty much my favorite. Umm... I can't think of more things to say. :P Oh well, see you in a week. XD--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:03, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Just realized Autumn was my WGC pick. :/--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:04, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Expect the unexpected. XD Psht, Missy-Autumn conflict. Manatee, I'll fix the chapter title. Thanks for the heads up. As for Doyce, don't blame him, too much. I needed some way to take Sebastian out of the challenge, and well... Him and Doyce have a one sided conflict going on, so why not exploit it? XD Thanks for the comments, guys. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:09, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY AUTUMN WHY? SHE WAS MY THIRD FAVORITE!! You better not eliminate Dante or Audrey II next... or else. JK JK. But I was right about the merge! These colors don't go together welldo they? 20:46, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Congrats on being right. Sorry about Autumn. :P Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:48, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Whoa, Autumn's out. Didn't see that one coming. On the one hand, I'm happy that Missy outlasted Autumn yet again, since I always side with Missy. On the other hand, I feel bad that she couldn't discuss the vote with Dante and Tsuyoshi. I'm sure they'll be bummed to see she's gone. With Autumn gone, the only female contestants left are all Ma Girls! XD Anyways, Tsuyoshi was interesting this chapter. I actually thought the reason for Tsuyoshi's constant working out and going out with a million different guys was due to low self esteem, but the whole loneliness due to his estranged family makes a lot of sense. It's pretty sad. Stevie reminded me of Eduardo in Wilderness with that analysis, but I think Stevie did a better job at it. Maybe because I like Stevie so much more. Doyce was literally insane this chapter. He's normally pretty out there, but his behavior in the challenge was cray-zay. :P It was really funny. Tsuyoshi and Dante's romantic date should be deliciously awkward... I look forward to it. Lastly, my favorite line of the chapter was when Doyce told Tsuyoshi that he was so bony that he thought he was a chair, and Tsuyoshi sheepishly replied "Thanks, Doyce". That was a funny moment. -Lalainee^{You are beautiful.} 20:53, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked that part with Doyce and Tsuyoshi. XD I didn't give it much thought, honestly. You know Tsu and Dante will react to their buddies elimination... as long as I remember to include it. XD Everyone keeps mentioning a link between Eduardo and Stevie with the analysis, but... I don't remember Eduardo doing it. o_O Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:00, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? You don't remember Eduardo doing it? He even said he's going to school to become a psychiatrist. Are you sure you wrote Wilderness?XD, Jk. 187.14.248.210 21:09, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

He did? I seriously don't remember that. o_O Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:13, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, it was me not logged in --I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 21:16, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Well... It's pretty hard for me to remember every detail about my one hundred and forty four characters. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:21, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

My bad, there is series B, now I have to erase that comment because I feel stupid. --I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 21:28, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

(Darn edit conflict) :P Great chapter. I loved the challenge, it's one of my favorites. Oh, no Audrey's epics moments today? :( Dude, I love Missy and Sebastian. Am I the only one that think they would be a sweet couple? xD Tsuyoshi and Dante date will be very awkward. Alex still my favorite BTW, but Missy's is pretty close to her, in 2nd. xD So, I thought Doyce would leave, as seem in the chapter. I didn't get why he did that to Sebastian, though. Well, I would prefer Doyce leaving than Autumn, as he already had a lot (lot, really) "screentime" (I consider him as a "screenhog"), while Autumn didn't do much. Howver, Doyce is my WCG guess, so, I'm glad he still on. xD My name is Bruno! 21:37, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Bruno, you're a man of conflicting emotions, I see. XD Doyce did that to Sebastian as he thouht he was Stevie, and allowed his competitiveness to go a little out of control. Haha. Thanks for your thoughts on the chater. I'm glad you liked the challenge so much. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:46, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dante's gay?! Is this for real Sprinks? I never thought it possible. I always sorta hoped he'd end up with Autumn. Nashwalker 19:14, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

-*Recovers from awesomeness* I know I said it quite some times about some of your chapters, but I have to say it again: This is the best chapter you have ever written! You're getting better and better. When Dante was about to enter that room, I was thinking "It's Basic Straining all over again", but then he got drunk and what I expected you to never do happened! That's why I'll never drink in my life... but with a slightly different "secret". The challenge was amazing, I loved how the competitors got more disrespectful as the rounds went by. I'm really hoping you post pictures of Sebastian in a speedo the characters in their costumes. I would never had guessed Zane would have such a serious backstory, that was a big surprise. And because of Zane and Stevie's interactions, I started to like them more (they were some of my least favorites). Missy's line about the violin really cracked me up, I think it was one of the funniest lines in the history of your fanfics. I felt bad for Zane even not liking him that much, but I still prefer Alexandria with Eduardo. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:57, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

You'll have to see, Nash. I don't give away much, sorry. I do give stuff away in chapters, though. 8D Manatee... Wow. You liked it that much, uh? Thanks, I appreciate that. It's better than hearing it's the worst ever. XD I made some Basic Straining references there, and brought it to a semi-darker level. I'm also glad you liked Zane and Stevie. It was a tough topic, but something I felt I needed to write about, and to give Zane a deeper character. So at least it succeeded with someone. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:46, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wow.. this was a pretty eventful chapter. For starters, a lot of people say that the truth comes out when alcohol is involved... in Dante's case, this is true in multiple ways. o_o I wasn't expecting that! It'll be interesting to see how it plays out, or if it's even true. I'm always apprehensive about whether or not to believe the things Dante says. This challenge was excellent! It was one of the best challenges you've had in a while, and it easily fits in my top 10 favorite challenges of your stories. My favorite impressions were Missy as Alexandria, Dante as Missy, and Alexandria as Audrey II. Sebastian as Doyce was kind of funny, but I think it was the most mean-spirited impression out of all of them. I was hoping Missy would win, and she did. As for the darker side of the chapter... Zane's story was pretty major. I think that's the darkest issue you've covered in your stories, or at least the one that was most difficult to read about. It was just really sad. However, as you should know, I don't frown upon... anything, when it comes to stories. I'll read whatever, as long as it's good. I think it kind of explains why Zane is the way he is, and I understand why you decided to go that route. I think what's saddest about it is that Zane is 22... who knows who long he's been withholding that story. :( Lastly, Missy was comedic gold this chapter. Her last violin line and her "oh, joy" line were both priceless. GO MISSY! -Lalainee^{You are beautiful.} 21:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lal. I'll admit that the thing with Zane has brought me to tears. It means a lot to me to get that into a story, even if it's such a touchy subject. I didn't do it for entertainment purposes, but to maybe, in some way, help someone. I don't know if that'll happen, but it was worth a shot, and I hope I handled it the best way I could. Sorry if it was really uncomfortable. I figured it would be. I didn't want to get into too much detail about the circumstances surrounding the incident, because that part doesn't matter. In my mind, there are more details, though. As for the rest of the chapter, well... I'm glad you liked the comedy. I don't know how I do it, when I also cover such deep topics, but... I do it, I guess. The challenge idea entirely comes from a chat session with Frank so you have him to thank. As for Sebastian's impression, I do think it was funny, but what probably bothered Doyce the most about it was that everyone else found it so funny, and that some semi-harsh things were added to his usual catchphrases, and the laughter made it seem like everyone agreed with what was being said... Obviously it'll be dealt with more, next time. So, in conclusion, thanks for the support. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:23, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Awww... Poor Zane. I think you handled that pretty well, considering it's a touchy subject and the fact that Zane seems to be just as lovable as before. Dante kinda turned in this chapter. His random mischievous attitude in the hotel was very surprising. I think his "homosexuality" was just the booze talking, but we'll see. I loved the challenge. It was really funny, even though it caused a little more tension between Tsuyoshi and Sebastian. Sebastian was extra funny as Doyce, but I think he kinda hurt Doyce's Doyceness. :P He seems okay though. Hopefully... Missy was epic in this chapter, especially the violin line. XD. I can't wait for more chapters!!!!!!!!--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 21:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Radi. I'm glad your view on Zane hasn't changed. As for Dante, well, while he is (or claims to be) reformed, he does still have a wild child in him. You'll have to see if Doyce gets his Doyceness back. XD I'm glad I left you wanting more. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:41, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

First thing's first: DOYCE!

Next: Poor Zane.

And Finally: Autumn is a sucky impressionist.

Th-th-th-th-th-th-th-that's all, folks!

EnTrey 21:42, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I think you mean Audrey, but thanks for commenting. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:45, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Dante why you gots ta be so everywhere with your character? So far Dante has been Nice, Hiding Something, Bad Personality, Gay, Conflicting emotionaly, and Just different. Zane is something I never saw coming, never. I feel molestation a touchy subject something i would avoid in writing just for fear I would offend everyone ever. Missy is well Missy no surprises no major storylines nothing.... What do you have planned Sprink??? Doyce is going to be a lot more quite and I expect a sudden change from epic to plain and boring back to good ol Doyce. Sebastian is well cruel, no more than that he has a bit of a jerk to Doyce and I think he should have to pay for his actions with a large amount of guilt or something. Audrey has been overall a I can take her or leave her kind of character so I have no high expectations, Tsu has been really a Major player in the game, I expect fully for him to have a loss near final four. Stevie is by no means going to win, just sad to say but to this point he has a target and I see no point in him winning. I am sure I forgot someone but I can deal with it.--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 07:49, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reading, Kenny. I guess Dante is all over the place, but... Well, I guess he's pretty complex. XD I tried to handle Zane's plot in a way that wouldn't offend everyone ever. A lot of people never come forward when they're abused out of such deep shame. I don't think it's a topic that should be ignored, but it needs to be handled delicately. I'm sorry if it offended you, though. IDK, I feel like Missy has storylines. You'll have to wait and see if anything else happens with her. But thanks for your thoughts on everybody (except Alexandria, I think). XD I appreciate that. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:31, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Alex is pretty awesome. Missy really has only been playing up her I am the Snake in the grass and think/doesn't think its working oh and flirting with sebastian. I am not offeded so worry not!--Kenzen11 - Blog - Talk 17:39, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Epic chapter. I loved the entire Tsu and Dante in the hotel. It was pretty funny. But then, it came Dante's revelation. O_o Shocking. This is oficially my favorite challenge of the season. I laughed at Audrey's bad impression. :P Alexandria's still the awesomenest character ever, and Missy's still the second. xP Things are getting worse for Sebastian and Tsu's friendship. Zane's revelation was shocking too. O_o Good job about writing about molestation, because that's something that you be carefully to talk about, and that's something that, unhapilly, happens with a lot of people. Zane's elimination were unexpected, but his "speech" was very good. :D My name is Bruno! 21:29, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a lot, Bruno. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the challenge. I also appreciate what I was trying to do with Zane, here. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:33, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Doyce. :( You're breaking my heart. </3 Glad he's back to being Doyce. Stevie's elimination was... unexpected. Maybe I didn't read something, but I don't understand why he was eliminated. Did Alexandria get Audrey to vote him out? Did Missy give in to Sebastian? Or was it a combination of both? I wonder why Dante didn't finish the race. First his eyes, then he's gay, and now he can't run. Something's getting suspicious. Maybe he really is dying this time, but he doesn't want to tell people because he thought they wouldn't trust him. I'm going to bold that so I can remember that that is my official prediction. :D Well... bye :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 19:32, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

That chapter felt so... Uneventful, Nolan was funny as always and Alexandria too with her "Ball catching costume" line. I was relieved when Sebastian got the final marshmallow, I thought an unpredictable elimination was going to happen. Dante is worrying me, maybe if he didn't smoke, that would not happen to him. By the way, there's a passage you wrote "Doyce attempts to put Doyce in a hold".--I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:38, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

I liked this chapter a lot! Doyce finally had something go his way, and Stevie actually lost? Le gasp! Anyway, Audrey is still creepishly hilarious, and I found a typo. When Sebastian says, "That leaves Stevie and I" at the elimination ceremony, it should actually be, "That leaves Stevie and me" as it you took out Stevie, that would leave, "That leaves I." That makes no sense. But, if you took out Stevie for "that leaves Stevie and me", then that would leave, "That leaves me." which makes more sense. It's a common mistake. You only use (insert name here) and I at the beginning or middle of a sentence. You use (insert name here) and me in the middle or end of a sentence. An easy way to know which one is to take out the name like I did with the quotation I corrected. I suppose if you want an example of (person) and I, then it would be, "The quotation Sprink and I corrected." An example of (person) and me would be, "Just leave it to Sprink and me for the job." I hope this makes sense. I know, I'm probably overreacting; but hearing Rachel from Big Brother make that mistake EVERY five minutes was enough to make me cringe. XD If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 19:44, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Radi, Dante had trouble in the race due to his smoking. He had trouble breathing. :P Sorry it was so uneventful, Manatee. It did have Doyce revealing about his parents, though not as shocking as Dante stating he's homosexual or Zane's molestation revelation, it is something pretty major that does happen and a lot of kids/teens deal with it. Also, Radi, it wasn't flat out stated, but Stevie's elimination was due to his being both a threat and also having a lot of people as friends, being generally amiable. It wasn't quite the fact that Missy gave into Sebastian, she just wanted Zane out before him. Now that Zane is out, she felt they could get rid of Stevie. Shane, I appreciate the help. I'll go fix it. :3 I'm glad you liked the chapter a lot, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:36, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to be sorry Sprink, some chapters are more eventful than others. I liked this chapter a lot, and to tell the truth I forgot about Doyce, poor Doyce. Well, at least he defeated the undefeated Stevie. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 20:40, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh... well... his smoking could be killing him. I'm going to stick with my theory. :) :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:49, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Go on ahead, Radi. I don't mind speculation. XD But... It really is from his smoking. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:53, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Stevie, right after Zane? Aw, you're killin' me, S-mist. Well, at least I still have Doyce! I'm pretty cool with the final seven, as I like all of them. Even Sebastian. See, I'm pretty surprised that I ended up liking Sebastian. I think what I like about him, is that he's getting played by Missy. I've always liked characters that get duped like that. However, I'm not so sure he'll remain duped for the whole game. I had this crazy theory that they actually become a real couple...but Missy seems like too much of a sociopath to actually date anyone. I suspected Stevie would be out next, but it is getting harder for my TDIwriter sense to predict the next person out. It's pretty hard to imagine the story without one of the remaining seven, actually. Then again, that's how the first All-Star story felt, too. Good job, bro, I look forward to more, next week. Use Your Illusions^{Abhor the Invitation of Promised Love} 21:01, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

I don't mind Stevie being eliminated. I just have one thing to say.

Tsu's a Stu. Glinda rules! 21:22, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad your liking the story. I am surprised that you're liking Sebastian. You'll have to see if your theory is right. And FoS... Orly? XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:31, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, yeah. I also predict that Zane, Brad, and McDizzle will return and become the final three. Estranged^{With all the changing season of my life, maybe I'll get it right next time.} 21:47, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

This was a pretty interesting chapter, Sprink. Before I read the chapter, I was actually thinking that Doyce would go home. I never would have guessed that two winners would be in the final seven. That's cool. I guess if they did well once, they have an idea of how to do well a second time. Except for Al. XD Stevie's elimination leaves Missy as the last surviving Boney Islander... I approve. Tropics is the most represented season remaining with three contestants left out of seven. Good for them! I hope Audrey outlasts those other two... speaking of, I loved Audrey this chapter! I liked her whole conversation about going with the flow of the game with Alexandria, and her random popcorn-eating. She amuses me in little ways. Missy was deliciously despicable, as usual. She's really got a good hold on Sebastian, right now. I wonder when he's gonna realize she's playing him really hard, or if he's even gonna realize that. Time'll tell. Before the race challenge started, I had a feeling Dante would wipe out during the race. Let that be a message, kids: not only will smoking kill you, it'll also render you unable to compete in reality show competitions! :O XD Allie (what I'm nicknaming Alexandria now because it takes way less time to type) was funny with all her singlet comments, and I was interested to see that she's kind of playing the game now. I wonder how Missy would feel about that. I think that's about it. Brandon's right, it's getting hard to predict who's going to go home next. It's fine though, because I love everyone that's left. I suppose if there's anyone I'm not particularly rooting for to win, it's Dante and Doyce. I wouldn't mind them getting far, but I don't think I'd put a "This user wants Doyce/Dante to win TD:BoB" on my userpage. The other five are fair game. XD -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 21:59, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments. Bro, I think you're thinking of your top 100 list. XD Lal, I'm glad you liked what you liked. I guess I'm glad it's getting less predictable. Aw to no Doyce/Dante love on your userpage. XD But that keeps five slots in your future user boxes. I hope to get those up this week, unless I forget... Which happened last time. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:23, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. Awesome chapter, Sprink. Alexandria is hilarious, even when she wasn't trying to be funny. xD That's why this girl is my favorite. And I love her being strategic. :P I must say that I loved Sebastian and Doyce. I liked that Sebastian gets more development, as he wasn't doing that much this season. I'm glad Doyce is returning to his Doyceness(?). I'm glad Audrey is making me laugh again. She wasn't doing that much in later chapter, but the scene with her eating popcorn while doyce was expressing his feelings to Stevie were hilarious. xD The fight challenge reminded me of TDAthletics's mud fight and sumo challenges. Oh, Tsu, go tell to Dante that you know his secret NOW. xD Poor Tsu, what's happening to him is pretty depressing. STEVIE!?!? Really? That was really shocking. The funniest thing is that all the Boney Island's were intact at the merge, but three of them have been voted off in a row. xD Dude, I'm so excited to read the next chapters. This is getting better and better. xD My name is Bruno! 22:23, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Bruno, I really appreciate all that. :) I gave you emotions it seems. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:43, November 21, 2011 (UTC)

Chat 3

I'm so glad Tsuyoshi refused going out with Dante, even him not being evil or something like that, I didn't want them together, I wish Tsu gets a boyfriend though, not necessairly from Total Drama. As for the elimination, I was already expecting it, but I enjoyed the random moment where Nolan dropped the marshmallow, as well as Dante's elimination, he was my least favoriute of the ones left. I also enjoyed what you did with the "You and I" thing that Shane pointed out. And I'm so excited for the revelation of your new characters, just one more week! --I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:07, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I do have to say, it seems like the most likely route that's being taken is that Tsuyoshi is going to win. And hey! My prediction was half right! Dante DID come out! XD Either way, it seems as though Missy's just being bagged on for no real reason. I understand she's fake and all, but Tsuyoshi, she is extremely gorgeous. Physically, yes. Emotionally, no. Knowing Sprink, she's likely to open up about how she's truly a nice person. XD Sorry, Sprink, I probably shouldn't make so many jokes about that. You are a great writer, I've just learned to expect the unexpected from you, which is a good thing, actually. As for Sebastian, I really hope he and Tsuyoshi do reconcile, but I hope that it's not a huge guilt trip for C-Bass, or Tsuyoshi, and that they come to an agreement or something. Looking forward to more! If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 19:11, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm.... Still trying to process things. Okay, I'm done. NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dante can't be eliminated! Oh, well. I guess I didn't expect a 7th place for Dante just like last time. I was still expecting something... more. But I guess it's that simple. Dante's gay. There must be some twist you still have in store for us, but I have no idea what it is. Maybe Tsu is the mastermind with the devious strategy. That would be interesting. Now I don't know what's going to happen. D: I don't want to start rambling like Nathan, so I'll end my pathetically short comment here. :P--Radicalm18 ^{"Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash."} 20:04, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Manatee, I'm glad you caught the Shane reference. I wonder if he did. XD The elimination was mor surprising before the chapter started, but yeah. I still think there's surprise to be had when things seem too obvious. And who are you to keep love apart? XD Shane, Tsuyoshi meant that Missy was ugly on the inside, not out. She kicked Dante when he was down, basically. So that's not so nice. Sorry. :P You'll see if she's actually nice pretending to be mean. You never know in a Sprink story. XDDDD Radi, yus. Dante is gay. It was pretty fun having everyone be so unsure about it. >:) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:18, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she's rather ugly on the inside... or so we think. You never know with you. XD And yes, I did catch on. I thought, "Ha-ha! YES! I GOT A REFERENCE IN A SPRINK STORY!" It's quite an accomplishment. I've only had one since Tropics, when Al called C-Bass well... C-Bass. If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 20:21, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of stuff happened in this chapter. First, Nolan did that... recap thingy, and then, the contestants all had pre-challenge interactions, and then the... challenge thing happened (just like that Survivor episode), and then the lobsters did a dance, and then they had an elimination. (This has been an in depth analysis by Trey)

EnTrey 20:24, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

This was an excellent chapter, Sprink. That's kind of a big deal, because I never use the word excellent to describe things. :P First of all, the whole Dante and Tsu thing was pretty sad. I felt bad for Dante when Tsu told him he couldn't go out with him because of his smoking and drinking. That must have hurt. But now that I've seen Dante willingly give up his spot in the game, I think I'm ready to believe that he's changed... unless this is all apart of his master plan to get some of the prize money from Tsuyoshi if he wins. I'm forever a cynic. XD I felt bad for Audrey too, this chapter (Get it? Audrey too. It's a pun!). She's really not cut out for the strategic aspect of this game. At least she had some funny moments, like her "We know" at the elimination ceremony. Also, I loved the little grammar nazi parody with the whole "You and I" thing. XDD I'll end my comment prematurely because I want my comment's focus to be entirely on my favorite moment of the chapter, and possibly one of my favorite moments in any of your stories, ever. When Tsu told Missy she was an ugly person, and she simply smiled at him, I died of laughter at what an absolutely evil person Missy is! She's bad to the bone, and she loves it! That smile to me was almost like Missy saying "I know. And I own it!" God, I love Missy. -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 20:26, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Trey saw the subliminal lobster dance? Cool. XD And congrats on being referenced again, Shane, besides in the reunion questions (which you always help me out with). Lal, how about the shirtless werewolf sarcasm from Audrey? XD As for Dante/Tsu, well yeah... He took a big step and got rejected. But also, on Tsu's part it shows that he learned a little something about himself. And, man Dante certainly will never live down his prior deceptive behavior. XD I should have had him threaten Tsuyoshi to give him the money if he won, and then say 'jk' and then say 'or am I?' XD And you would like that scene of Missy. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:34, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

I must say, I'm proud to be a grammar nazi. XD If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 20:37, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Somehow I forgot the shirtless werewolf thing while I was writing that comment. XD Oh, Audrey. If you had written Dante as saying all that, it would have been really funny. Oh wellz. And of course I liked that scene of Missy. You know I love a good villain. XD If there was a wiki Heroes vs. Villains type thing, I'd totally be one of the villains. -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 20:39, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Villains are more fun anyway. I agree with you on that. I loved the Twilight reference. I thought, "That is so Audrey..." I hope she wins this, then uses that money to fund a shirtless werewolf habitat for scarred shirtless werewolves. If you're going to lie to an all-knowing admin, you should at least put some effort in it. 20:40, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Shane, that's fine about the grammar nazi-ism. I can be that way, at times, but I mostly make a joke when a mistake is funny. Then I feel bad for pointing it out since I make grammar mistakes, a lot, and the user doesn't normally find it as funny. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:43, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

- First Autumn now Dante? If Audrey II is next I'm seriously gonna lose it :P. Though this chapter was really good, and Audrey seems to be getting a bit of character development, and more personality. I'm rooting for her, and Alex. I'm starting to hate Tsu a bit. No offense Sprink, I just tend to be hateful towards lots of characters. And Tsu still seems Stuish, which bothers me a lot. Missy is becoming pretty awesome for an antagonist. Poor Dante :(, he's losing his eyesight and Tsu turned him down, then he was eliminated. I think Alex, or Missy will win, maybe Sebastian. My new prediction: 6. Tsu- a threat, Missy will get Doyce to vote with her, and Sebastian to convince the others, then Sebi and Tsu will make up and become biffles again. 5. Doyce- Missy will veiw him as a threat to, and use Sebi 4. Missy- Alex or maybe Audrey will realize what's happening and the 2 of them will vote her off. 3. Sebi- since this will obviously be sudden death he'll lose. 2. Audrey II- She'll mess up in the final challenge and Alex will win 1. Alexandria- Ta-da! Those are my predictions and if they don't come true then... IDK. Signature 20:48, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

THanks for the comment and the speculation. Sorry that you think Tsu is a Stu. XD IDK why really, but whatever. Focus does not a Stu make. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:55, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dude, this one was a epic chapter. A lot of stuff happened. So, I didn't wanted Tsu and Dante as a couple. I was kinda suspicious about Dante, but now I kno that he really changed. Unless if it's a part of his evil plan where he returns at the final chapter sad, stoles the prize money and kills everybody. xD Audrey was pretty fun this chapter. I'm glad she got a bit more development, with her "friendship" with Alex and Missy. Talking about then, dude, Missy is one of the best antagonists ever. She fits with the "Best of the Best" season's theme, as the best f the best antagonist. xD I liked Sebastian, the grammar-nazi moment. xD My name is Bruno! 21:31, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

... I need to think up a new ending, now. Thanks a lot, Bruno. Nah. XD I appreciate the comment. :) Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:04, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

That was the most dramatic scrolling down I ever did in my life, too bad the results were not the best, at lest for me. Poor Sebastian, wrong about Dante, wrong about the fact that having muscles is useless (I'm with you C-Bass!), wrong about a freaking taxi! Maybe he was wrong about Missy using him too. As for the other people, I really want Tsuyoshi or Audrey to win now. But I can look on the bright side, the final five finally came! Now let the new characters come!!!! I shouldn't be this excited. Isn't it weird that I had a dream that one of the characters for your nex story was Lindsay dressed as Joanna? --I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 18:14, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Sebastian. Blinded by love. :P I knew Missy was up to something when she went off to "go to the bathroom." I figured she was tampering with Tsuyoshi's equipment, not her own. Not the smartest plan Missy's ever had. She's lucky Sebastian likes her so much, or she'd be packing her bags. Now I'm kinda hoping for Tsuyoshi against Missy finale, except my final three guess is messed up, so it's probably wrong. I predict the Athletes will be the next two out, but that guess was already taken. I hate when you end conflicts between characters, but I always end up liking their friendships too. I'll miss Sebastian's quarrels with Doyce though.--Radicalm18 ^{"Everybody best be lookin' at me, cuz I've got Christmas swag!"} 18:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Great chapter. The chapter was pretty awesome, BTW. Oh, Sebastian, I never thought you wouldbe blinded by love. :P But it's Missy, she's hot. Reasonable. xD I was so afraid that Missy would die, or being eliminated. Sprink, you are smart. :P Well, I didn't expected the last two remaining males be the two others winners. xD I could expect Tsuypshi going fa, but not Doyce. Sprink, it's final 5. Are you going to reveal new season's character soon? :P My name is Bruno! 19:31, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, boys. Manatee, that is pretty funny about your dream. I can assure you that your dream will not come true. XD I'm glad you're excited for the next cast. Sorry about ending conflicts, Radi. It does scare me that you want everyone mad at each other. XD Bruno, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Missy was originally going to hit her head to explain her unconsciousness, but I didn't want to freak anyone out. And yeah, Bruno, the new characters will start being posted soon, though, I want this new chapter to settle in before I start revealing people. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:17, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Tsu's still a Stu. With Sebastian gone what'll happen next? Well it is a Sprink story, anything could happen, I hope it involves Char Devolopment for Audrey. I feel like the only reason Audrey makes it so far, is because her character is important to you, which is understandable. Those are my only problems with the story, Stu's, and sort-of one dimensional chars. Signature 20:33, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

I loved Chapter 13, alot XD. But, the elimination was very shocking. I thought that Sebastian (did i spell his name right?) would win lol. But Awesome chapter! Rooting for Doyce/Alexandria! XDD Justice11 20:35, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys. Fan... What exactly do you think a Stu is? XD I had some character development for Audrey last time. XD And I don't exactly keep characters around based on how I feel about them. The placement would be pretty different if I did. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:48, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh boy... this chapter was crazy! I'm starting to think there must be something wrong with Missy. I mean, she deliberately placed herself in danger just to get further in a game show! I still love her, but I think Brandon might have been up to something when he referred to her as a sociopath. Alexandria had a few zingers here and there, which I liked. Audrey and Doyce were pretty good, too. I couldn't believe that Sebastian gave up the game for Missy! Especially considering the fact that he knows she's been using him. I guess he really is in love with her. Poor guy. XD I thought it was really funny when he thought the first cab was for him at the end of the chapter, and it was actually for some random old woman. He's not very good at being right, that Sebastian fellow. Sebastian's exit leaves Audrey as the sole survivor of the Tropics contestants! Good for her. I had a feeling that would happen. Missy is now the lowest ranked contestant left, and she came in 5th. That's not low at all. These last few chapters are gonna be intense! The only contestant who is guaranteed to do just as well if not better than last time is Missy right now. But really, I can't believe she's gotten this far! She's been at risk basically every week and she's still here! I have to root for her just for that. I'm not sure who's gonna go next, but I think it's gonna be... Tsu..? I don't know. Alexandria and Audrey II are both kind of unpredictable vote-wise, so I guess we'll have to see. -Lalainee^{You'd think that people would have had enough of silly love songs.} 21:23, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Et perfecta utraque winners Quid adhuc? Bibendum at, got suus Missy Karma. C-Bass Tsuyoshi gaudeo et amici sunt postea. (Trey's comment in Latin)

24.46.237.203 21:41, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

^ Meum.

EnTrey 21:44, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, guys. Trey... I'm too lazy to run that through a translator. XD Lal, well, I feel like Missy took a calculated risk. She thought she'd be saved by Sebastian, and she purposely stayed lower to the ground. It didn't work out for her so well, sadly. XD We're gettin' down to it, I guess. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:08, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm was to lazy to write a comment in English, Sprink.

EnTrey 22:13, December 5, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Sebastian, I know how he feels. But he should be smart enough to know that the only thing Missy loves is herself. - Copper5

Thanks for the comment, Copper. It's cool to see you around. Sebastian may realize it, but he can't help his feelings, even if he wishes he could. :3 Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:21, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty sweet chapter, my man. I'll miss Sebastian...which is something I never thought I'd say. -Splashes water into face-. Anyway, I'm supa-thrilled that I can Doyce-it-up for at least another week. Double win, suckaz! ^('o')^ I'm warming up to Tsuyoshi, again, since he was somewhat less prominent in this chapter. To be honest, I'm surprised Missy made it this far again. And Audrey...well, it amazes me that she's avoided major injury. Missy definitely screwed up, this go around. Tampering with your own equipment? In the words of the great Keanu Reeves, "That's like...whoa." I'm also really excited that the Deception characters are being posted, now. Can't wait for next week, bro! Oh yeah, Nolan was especially epic, this chapter XD "Much Ego Man" Brandy Savage ^{Dig it?} 02:26, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for saying those nice things. I like nice things. 8D. I'm glad you're excited for the new characters. I always enjoy the posting process. While Missy's move was o_O, it also fit her surprisingly, a lot. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:27, December 6, 2011 (UTC)

That was a creative intro, I don't know why I found Nolan saying finny so funny. I actually opened Nolan's page to see his teeth when Audrey mentioned it XD. I don't know how to ride a bike too, I tried so many times and couldn't get it right so I gave up, but I intend to learn it in this vacation (it's never too late). I'm glad Doyce was eliminated, not because I don't lke him, I do, but I like the others better, except Missy who I hope to be the next one. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 18:40, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

No! Doyce! Oh, well. I didn't really expect him to win, but it's his first elimination. D: I don't think I can go on. :P I found it shocking that he couldn't ride a bike. I thought that was creative. Why is everyone teaming up with Missy? I don't get it. Hopefully, Alexandria will team up with Tsuyoshi. That would be an epic alliance. I don't know what else to talk about................ DOYCE!--Radical M ^{"Everybody best be lookin' at me, cuz I've got Christmas swag!"} 19:14, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, thanks for the comments. I hope to elaborate why everyone teamed up with Missy next time, if I get the chance/if I remember. But there is reasoning behind it. Sorry about Doyce, Radi. Thanks for being one of his biggest supporters. I got the idea of Doyce not being able to ride a bike, and thought it was pretty epic. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 19:53, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

No more Doyce! :(. But Audrey got so much char development that I'm going to stop bothering you about it! My predictions:

1. Audrey! The last challenge she'll mess up, and think she lost but for some reason the mess up helped her.

2. Missy!- Whats a good antagonist if they don't make it to the final 2?

3. Tsu! I don't know why.

4. Alexandria! Missy, and Tsu the strategist will team up, against Audrey, and Alexandria, and there will be a tie.

Those are my predictions and I don't think any of them will happen except Tsu getting 3rd. Green is not a creative color 20:31, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yay for you not bothering me about Audrey. XD Thanks, for that, and the speculation. We'll see if you got it/anything right. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:54, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm surprised that Doyce didn't use a hidden immunity idol and use it to get rid of Boston Alexandria.

Oh well, he's gone, and the screentime just got 99% more equal because of it.TDWT>TDI-Slicer37 20:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ha. Great chapter as always. Final four already? So, I loved the recap. Nolan is awesome, dude. :P I can't believe my two faves are in the final four. I loved this, Final 4 are all in my Top 12. :DD So, Tsu is freaking needing a alliance. :P I'm not surprised that Doyce and Audrey didn't wanted Missy out, even though everybody hates her. Me like Alex-audrey's friendship. :3 So, Missy has a heart? And she doesn't hates Doyce (that much)? O_o So, Audrey is usefull. I'm happy that happened. And she won a challenge. xD So, Doyce elimination make sense. I like him, but he was my least-fave from the last 5. That ruined both my WGC and F3GC chances, though. :( So, Final four, it's between sassy hottie, evil hottie, awkward hottie, and Stu strategist dude. :P My name is Bruno! 21:12, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. I felt like Doyce's screentime was more balanced than it was in Athletics. He's not a team player, after all, so it's not shocking that he can be a screenhog at times. :P I'm surprised no one has called Tsu Stuyoshi... Not that I'm encouraging it. :P Thanks for the comments. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:19, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm a little tired, so I don't really feel like writing a super long comment like I usually do. :P I'll just say this was a really good chapter, and I'm okay with Doyce going home. Of the people that were left, I think I wanted him to win least. I'm also interested to see what exactly is up with Missy, and to find out who's going to go home next week. I personally think people keep teaming up with Missy because they know she won't have support in the final 2 challenge, but that's just me. Das it. Go Missy! EDIT: 5 guys in a row?! I don't think I've seen that before in any of your stories. XD -Lalainee^Courage 21:30, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment, Lal. Get some rest, girl! XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:37, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that I haven't slept, today was just a very loooong day. That + having to walk home to my house which is very far from my high school has left me feeling very tired and lazy. :P ---Lalainee^Courage 21:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria better win!!!!!! I'd root for both her and Missy, but Missy got rid of Audrey. Poor Audrey II. I predict Tsu will be eliminated next because he already won. I was the first to comment after the new chapter! Double signature 20:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC) Double signature 20:36, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Alexandria helped, though I saw no reason for that conversation to be in the story. "Vote for Audrey"... "Okay." Thanks for the first comment. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:39, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

My poor baby Audrey! D: She's fallen in 4th place again! Well, I think she was lucky to even make it this far. With her departure, Total Drama Tropics becomes the second story with all of its characters out of the running. Anyways, the chapter was awesome. You know how I feel about game shows... I was eating it all up. I loved Audrey's pathetic attempt at Pyramid (or Password, the two are pretty similar), and the Match Game challenge was pretty great. Alexandria's answers to the Family Feud challenge were pretty mean. I guess that can happen if a sassy person isn't given time to filter their thoughts. XD Tsu telling off Missy was pretty interesting. I thought Missy would have some kind of reaction, but I guess she didn't. She reminds me more and more of a sociopath as this game progresses. :P I'm still rooting for her, though. I knew Audrey would get voted out once Tsu threw her under the bus in his conversation with Missy. What he said did make sense, but Missy failed to realize that Tsu is a bigger threat for immunity and could win his way to the final two. We'll see how that plays out, I guess. I think I'll be happy with whoever wins at this point. -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 20:48, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

There goes Audrey... Poor girl, I was rooting for her. Besides that, incredible chapter, I felt like I was in those flashy stages full of weirdly clothed people, and it had a good amount of comedy and drama too, and all the cameos and everything. I have a prediction for who the final two could be, even the challenge and what would happen, but I feel like I have a 0,001% chance of getting it right and ruining people's surprises. It's weird how I went from liking Missy to disliking her so fast EDIT: And what's with you writers and Old Man Jenkins lately? I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 20:54, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

...I won the F3GC? :O I have a few ideas about who to pick to return, but I'm still finalizing. The challenge was great, I liked seeing all the contestants cameo. Nolan's swollen tongue bit at the beginning was pretty funny, too. Poor Audrey, she ended up getting the same place as last time. XD But yeah, great chapter, and it's pretty much anyone's game now. I want Alex to win, but I'd be content with the other two. I'll PM you in chat when I pick my character to return. Is it the look in your eyes,^{Or is it this dancing juice?} 21:00, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Toad, you have a huge responsibility in your hands right now. Who you pick could be a critical decision. Just please, do me a favor and don't pick Shaila... XD -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 21:03, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. It is pretty funny, the sudden Missy hate. I didn't know Audrey was so popular. XD I'm glad you both liked the chapter, though. The Audrey vs. Alexandria game was Password, because of the one word clues. Manatee, Who else used Old Man Jenkins? o_O Congrats, Toad, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

@Sprink Oweguy did, he made a reference in chapter 10 of TD Beach Party Mayhem. And Layla, knowing how Toad is becoming a troll lately he might just pick Shaila XD. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 21:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I was actually considering picking Shaila, just to piss you guys off. But don't worry, she won't be in... Unless Sprink suddenly turns into a troll. XD Is it the look in your eyes,^{Or is it this dancing juice?} 21:17, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

XD Maybe I'm secretly Shaila's biggest fan, and I'm using reverse psychology to make you want to pick her. Probably not. -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 21:18, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

I have more to write in my comments actually! Sid Tsu plan Audrey's elimination? I laughed so hard at the "Old man Jenkins draws a Doyce" :P Double signature 22:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC) Double signature 22:19, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh. -__- Audrey deserved to win, :( Missy and Tsuyoshi got really annoying around the final 10 mark, so go Alexandria I suppose, woot. :D

Super epic chapter. :D Missy is epic. She is so cold-hearted, cruel and mean, but I love her. *everybody shootz me*. So, Tsuyoshi isn't that nice as I thought. It seems that he planned Audrey's elimination to save himself. Finally he did something strategic this season. I loved the challenge. I loved the losers' cameos. Old Man Jenkins draws a Doyce cracked me up. xD Woot, Alex won a challenge. I'm definitely rooting for her, but with my luck, she will be the next voted off. :P I'm rooting for her and Missy. Tsu is awesome, but I would hate to seen him winning twice, or even making it to Final 2 twice. I can see that happening, though, as anyone could win the game by that point. This is the best Final 3 of a Sprink story, ever. :D Audrey elimination was pretty sad. At least it wasn't Missy or Alex. xD Oh Toad, why you did that guess before me. >:( I was so close to chose someone to return. :( But I will give you 100 bucks if you chose Patsy, Emmy, Wade or Brent. :P My name is Bruno! 23:10, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. I'm glad you liked all those stuffs. :3 Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 23:13, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Poor Audrey, She was always my fave. But Go Missy! - Copper5

I don't know if the challenge was a big Mario Kart reference or if I have been playing too much Mario Kart 7 lately XD. Bucky seems like a nice guy, I hope Tsuyoshi can finally be with someone for a decent amount of time before breaking up, or not breaking up at all. His elimination was not that bad, since he already won, but I really didn't want to see Missy in the finals, besides that a villain already won an All Stars season I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 18:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

That's true. Though Protagonists win more often. XD You'll see what happens. Thanks for the comment. I guess the challenge was a Mario Kart reference with Alexandria's costume and the turtle throwing.I'm glad you like Bucky, too. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:26, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yippee! The final two consists of two of Ma Girlz! I haven’t referred to them as that in a while. xP One of them will be the first girl to win since Wilderness. I think I’m satisfied with Tsu coming in third. I didn’t particularly want to see him win twice, and he had a pretty good run throughout the competition. I thought his interaction with random cameraman Bucky was cute. :3 That’s an interesting way to get him involved in a relationship (or so I assume) with someone outside of Total Drama while still allowing us to see who they are. Alexandria would have to have been stupid to take Tsu over Missy… for a second, I thought she might. I’m glad she’s smarter than that. I don’t think the points Tsu raised were actually that good, but he’s a pretty convincing speaker. :P I loved Missy’s comment about Alexandria forgetting to wax her moustache, and I thought it was interesting that Missy wasn’t actually bribing Bucky to distract Tsuyoshi. Though, I’m not sure why Bucky was even carrying a suspicious wad of cash in his pocket… I guess it’s just one of life’s many mysteries. Missy’s attempts at being underhanded during the challenge were funny, especially when she turned the sign to point in the opposite direction. It was such a clichéd 50’s cartoon villain thing to do. XD That’s about it. I’m rooting for Missy to win, but I think it’s going to be Alexandria. Either way, I’ll be happy. I can’t wait to see how this season wraps up! -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 20:29, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Lal. :3 I'm glad you liked Bucky. His wad of cash was something I thought of just to make the viewer think she was bribing, just for a bit of fun/cliche. Some guys just carry a billfold, as opposed to a wallet, so it's more something like that. I'll explain more about his randomly showing up in Tsu's trivia. Tsu kind of had to say something to try to keep himself in the game, and I feel like his points were about the best he could do, while still taking a little jab at Missy. XD I like him as a fighter all the way up to the end. As for Missy's sign turning, it's more of 60's cartoon thing. XD I liked that part, too, and that it actually helped them. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:36, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Whoo! I was hoping Tsu was going to get out. (I do like him, but after all, he did win Reality.) I loved the chapter title, and the challenge itself was fun. I love Mario Kart, and Tsu's interactions with Bucky were great. I wanna see a picture of Bucky, but maybe I'll draw it. XD The elimination wasn't that surprising, and I'm glad Alexandria picked him to be out, because... I don't know why. :P I'm fine with either of the girls winning, but I'd prefer Alex. Missy would be okay, but like some others have said, I don't want a villain winning both all-star stories. I wish I'd have picked Alexandria this time, but the f3GC is fine too. :P Go Alex/Missy! Is it the look in your eyes,^{Or is it this dancing juice?} 20:39, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you can't be too greedy, Toad. XD I'm glad people are liking Bucky. I might make a pic of him, why not? That doesn't mean you can't, too. Glad the final two pleases you, too. Thanks for the comment. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:50, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

C'mon Alex... represent sarcasm! Double signature 21:39, December 26, 2011 (UTC) Double signature 21:39, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Haha. I don't know how to respond to that. Thanks for the comment. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:38, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yay. Awesome chapter. I loved the Kart challenge, specially the Mario Kart's references. xD Tsuyoshi and Bucky's relationship is pretty nice. :D It's fun to see him with someone who isn't from the competition. I thought Missy was bribing the cameraman, but I was wrong. xD I loved the old cartoons' reference with Missy turning the sign to the opposite side. xD I was extremally happy when Alexandria won invincibility. Missy's reason to stay was pretty convincing, but Tsu's reason wasn't really that good, to be honest. Yay, my two favorites all-time characters are in the Final 2. This is really the Best of the Best fanfiction. :P I'm rooting for Alexandria, because she is the best. I'd be really happy if Missy won, though. I really don't care about a villain winning a All-Star season twice. Villain rules! :D My name is Bruno! 01:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked the challenge and the chapter, Bruno. Bucky, too. Can you think of a better reason that Tsu should stay? XD That was pretty hard to think up. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, my reason would be "Missy is evil. Let me stay." xD My name is Bruno! 01:50, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

That's a more direct way of what he said, the line about Alexandria having to live with her self if Missy did win. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 02:13, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

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I posted Bucky's pic. I had planned for his face to be more chubby, but I tried flattening it out, and liked it far better. He doesn't look as young as I might have intended, but ah well. I still like the pic. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 16:22, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I like the pic too! :3 How old is he, like 26 or 27? When I read the chapter yesterday, I assumed that he started working as a cameraman on Boney Island at either 19 or 20, which would still make him relatively close in age to Tsuyoshi by the current competition. -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 16:29, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he said he was older than Nolan, so he'd probably be between 26 and 30. Thanks, btw. Also if Toad or anyone wants to draw him different from this, that's fine. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 16:34, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm even happier for Tsuyoshi now, Bucky is cute! I also forgot to comment about that sign turn, loved the cliché feel about that. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 16:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, I don't see why his cuteness matters. XD Thanks, though, I guess. It's also funny that Tsuyucky/Buckoshi is pretty much canon with the readers. XD Yeah, I'm glad people liked the sign turning scene. I have to put something funny in a story every now and then, right? Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 16:51, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'd go with Buckoshi... Tsuyucky has the word yucky in it. XD I think his cuteness just makes people happier for Tsu because Tsu's a good guy who deserves a good guy, who also happens to be attractive? :P I actually thought Bucky would be chubbier or less good-looking, or something. Maybe his face fat got transferred to his ginormous butt. XD -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 16:56, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, it's like Layla said. He is already a nice guy, and besides that he is attractive. It's not like I was not happy before seeing his image. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 17:01, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha, Lal. He had a huge cheek, kinda like Brody, I guess. I had envisioned him a little less good looking, but this is how the pic turned out. And, aw, you noticed his giant butt. XD That was done to make up for Tsuyoshi's lack of a butt. XD And yeah, Buckyoshi sounded weird. I do like Tsuyucky, since it sounds like baby talk more, but Buckoshi has no 'yucky'. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 17:08, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

I like Bucky's pic. He has a big butt. xD Is he related to Leshawna? :P My name is Bruno! 20:32, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Durr, no. :P Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:43, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Yay. Losers chapters FTW! :P Nolan cracked me up extremally in this chapter, specially the "You ate a contestant?" joke. xD I'm so happy to see Prisiclla again. She's still the though girl that I love. :D Nathan has changed a lot. I'd like to see this side of hiom in the show. I'm so happy that Irene is back to the monitor girl that was my favorite character ever. ;D Zane still awesome, also. I support Stevie, the psychologist. :P I'm glad to see Yesenia too. Her and Nolan are cute together. Micky D. is dah best of dah best rappah evah. xD Audrey and Doyce still hilarious as ever. I liked the scene with Dante and Tsu and Bucky, Dante is way nicer this time. But I still thinking he will stole the winner's money and leave forever. xD I'm happy to see the losers again, and can't wait to the best finale ever. Go Alex! :P My name is Bruno! 20:46, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Bruno. You liked a lot from the chapter, so I appreciate that. I wanted to show Nathan has changed, and his change was pretty drastic. XD He and Irene was entirely random, though, but I liked it. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

That episode surprised me! I am at a hotel right now and for no reason at all decided to check the wiki. I was missing a losers chapter in this story. Nolan's line about Brad eating the contestants cracked me up too.I still didn't got the thing about Irene and Nathan, are they dating or he just fixed her cable? I honestly didn't liked Stevie as a psychologist, I just think it doesn't fit his slightly dumb personality from Boney Island, although I would love to see psychologist Eduardo. I would comment on every character, but I just dont feel like doing it, sorry.I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 00:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine, Manatee. I appreciate your comment, anyway. I think it does fit Stevie from TD:BI, but far more subdued. He wanted to help people, for example, Zane with his homophobia, but as with this story, it showed that he wasn't ready to be a huge help back then, as he was looking at the issue and not the reasons behind it. I don't consider him dumb in that story, but maybe I'm forgetting something. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 03:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, losers chapter! Irene and Nathan's relationship is funny, and so random. XD I have to say, I was kind of sad to see Irene go back to being "iRene". I don't think it's meant to be sad, but in a way, I see it as Irene regressing instead of progressing. :( At least she seems happy. I liked seeing Priscilla, again. She turned out to be one of my favorite early outs of this story. The Dante-Tsu-Bucky scene was interesting as well.. poor Dante. :P He's probably content for Tsuyoshi, at least. It seems like Sebastian maybe doesn't hate Dante anymore, based on their interaction in the chapter. He seemed annoyed with Dante's comment, but the fact that they were even in the same general area hanging out says something to me. I think Stevie will make a good psychologist. The role fits him a little better than it did Eduardo, in my opinion. Audrey and Doyce? Oh, boy. That could be funny. If that happens, Audrey's track record with hooking up with guys who win seasons of Total Drama will continue. XD Das it for this one. Go Missy! -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 18:30, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, maybe Irene just isn't ready, yet, and she needs Nathan to help her make the transition. XD Audrey at least was attracted to Tsu, so I guess that's another winner for her track record. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:32, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I forgot to mention something. Was Priscilla's comment about it being a good thing that she has a boyfriend a joke about her being attracted to athletic Asian guys? I thought that was pretty funny. -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 20:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sort of. Nathan is her type, I guess, but also he's more attractive, now, do to his being himself. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:52, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, Missy won. It's not because of what she did in Best of the Best, it's more about what she did in Boney Island, I still feel she needed a revenge from Autumn. Looking back at it, this finale was very similar to the All-Stars Finale, a villain against a 3rd placer, with the villain winning. Besides that, I laughed ou loud when Nolan yelled 'Bring in the elephants', the 'Go, Bwah!'reference was awesome too. I'm really going to miss Nolan as a host. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 19:44, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yay. Awesome chapter. This is my favorite season from Sprink's stories. :D Total Drama Reality, you have been beaten. xD I loved the chapter, specially because the Final 2 are my two all-time favorites. Nolan is a awesome host, I'll miss him if he didn't return to host next season. I loved the losers introductions. Poor Missy, just got one supporter. :( I loved the challenge. It was a thrilling challenge. I was most rooting for Alex (like 51% for Alex, 49% for Missy). I was susprised that Alexandria won. But honestly, when I read Tsu's Trivia "I decided to switch their placement in order to have Tsuyoshi place the best overall of any character in my stories", I was expecting Alex losing. :P But I'm really happy Missy won. :) She proved that a villain can win. I always knew that she was the Best of the Best. Her little moment with Sebastian in the end was cute. :3 I hope they end up dating. :D I'm happy that Alex is also the 2nd Best of the Best. :D My name is Bruno! 19:53, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ew Missy won? >_> I don't like the fact that a mini-Heather won, and I really didn't like the final three. I'm looking for to TD:DI, however. Okay chapter. --N^DU_KETis the season to be PJ! "..." 19:55, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Haha, Manatee. You got the Go Bwaah, thing. XD Sorry to disappoint, though. Personally, I think Creigh and Missy are far different, but that's just me I guess. Alexandria's placement varied, but I probably should have placed her elsewhere, but there were other variables I was considering. Bruno, I realized that trivia might have been a spoiler, but I thought changing it when I realized it would be suspicious. Also, I thought I've been sneaky in the past, so people might have thought i did it on purpose. Nduke, thanks for the positive...Wait, nevermind. XD I guess I can't expect to please everyone every season. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:08, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, Sprink, you wanted to trick everyone. xD It wasn't that much of a spoiler, since it says that he is the better ranked overall, but it doesn't says that Alex could be the best too. xD So, am I the only one who loved Missy winning? Layla, where are you to represent the Missy's fans. :P My name is Bruno! 20:13, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I’M RIGHT HERE, BRUNO! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YES YES YES!!! Missy won! I’m so excited and happy! She was probably going to return for this season without my choice, but her victory makes me feel pretty good about choosing her to return! Eeeeee! I haven’t been this excited about a win since… ever! Missy if the best of the best Total Drama competitor in any of your stories ever! WOOO! The only other thing I can remember to comment on is Sebastian’s support of Missy throughout the chapter. It was so cute! I got so excited when he helped her with the puzzle, and when he asked her out at the end. I don’t know how exactly that couple is going to end up, but I think it’s awesome that Missy agreed to go out with him. All right, that’s it! This was an amazing finale to an amazing season, and I can’t wait to see what’s in store for TD:DI! VIVA LA MISSY!! -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 20:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and I just remembered. The part where Missy says it's not her fault everyone is so light skinned... you may want to change the wording of that. I thought she was making a weird comment about race. XD Maybe thin skinned? -Lalainee^{Mirror in the sky, what is love?} 20:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, how I rank a season deals little with who wins, and I don't base my winners on fan faves, but what I plan/want. Sorry if it disappoints anyone, but I hope you enjoyed the season regardless. And wow, Lal. Tell me how you really feel. XD As for that statement, it was meant to be racist... Ok, not really. XD Thanks for the heads up. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:43, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

You did the Go!! Bwahh video. I don't really care that Missy won, she's a bad person but she worked hard enough to deserve it. Wait... she helped eliminate Autumnn, and Audrey II. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS SPRINK!!!!!!!!! :P I actually don't mind that much, did Sebi and Missy hook up? I liked when they were pelting eggs at her. I liked this season, it was better than Boney Island and Wilderness, but not as good as Reality and Tropics. Those are the only Sprink stories I've read. Which is most of them I guess... I'm a banana! 20:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The All-Stars was pretty well received, too. Thanks for the comment, FoS. I'm glad I'm not the only one to know the Go Bwaaaah thing. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:48, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Good finale chapter, and great season overall. I'm especially happy with Missy winning, because she was my pick for the winner guessing contest. :P I also liked Sebastian being the only one to support her, even if he couldn't help her out in an egg-throwing way. TDAddict ^{I just got tired of my other sig.} 21:03, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, TDAddict. Let me know some ideas you have for a prize you might like. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:06, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, well, I really didn't have any idea for a prize, I just wanted to guess the winner. Anything is fine by me. TDAddict ^{I just got tired of my other sig.} 21:08, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe I can draw you a character pic, or something, unless that's too lame. XD I'm open to other suggestions, though. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:12, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well, I don't really think I'm gonna need a pic anytime soon, but the only other thing I could think of is picking a character for the lose- winning challenged, story. TDAddict ^{I just got tired of my other sig.} 21:20, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I guess that's fine by me. Meet me on chat if you go on there and pm me your choice, unless you want to think about your choice, more. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 21:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sprink, I don't think I made it clear but the only thing I didn't liked was the winner. I loved this season, it's my second or third favorite. I'm Manatee, and for some reason I like the number twelve. 21:47, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I thought I saw that win come. :P Nice season, can't wait for TDI. Flame..... is...... on..... FIRE! 22:29, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, guys. I appreciate the comments and season love. XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:36, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I honestly didn't expect Missy to win after seeing an antagonist win last All-Stars. But one thing was different. There was no random change of heart! Yay! :D Random changes of heart make me nauseous. :P Just kidding, but sometimes they can annoy me. They just seem unrealistic, and I was fearing that my favorite antagonist would become... good. Great story overall. I can't wait for Total Deception Island! :)--Radical M ^{"Everybody best be lookin' at me, cuz I've got Christmas swag!"} 00:56, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the support, Rad. Creigh had a change of heart, but that was his villain side. Missy was also more blatant. Creigh's good change of heart happened before he was revealed as a villain. But it got revealed and he couldn't go back. Glad your excited for the next story. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 01:04, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yay Missy! She deserved to win. Anyway, I have a reunion question. Audrey II, are you dating anyone right now? From her biggest fan, to his role model and insparation. - Copper5]

Thanks, Copper. You wanna know if Audrey is single for your own nefarious purposes? XD Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 20:15, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

I missed Nolan, too bad he will not host Worst of the Worst. I seriously hope I wasn't the only one to check Nathan's butt after Irene's statement. And yay, he went back to cheerleading. I swear I didn't check Nolan's neck... Okay, maybe I did. The "Nah it's yams" line made me want Nolan back even more. I'm a talking manatee! Whas that the reason for Autumn to say "no comment" or was that her opinion on Missy's victory? Oh, Audrey, I though I was the only one who... Oh, wait, what was I saying? Well, I'll wait for Anders to be officialy revealed so I can rejoice. And, aww, I wnted to be the one pointing out the repeated chapter title :P Manatee12^{"They call him Hermit, The Frog!"} 22:38, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

It was her opinion on Missy, not you being a talking manatee. XDDD I hate when I come up with a repeat chapter title, 'cause I usually love those ones. XD I certainly have written a lot of chapters... Sorry about Nolan, though. He was fun as host, I thought. As for Nathan's butt, I had to check if he even had one, but he does in his TDAthletic sleepwear pic. Thanks for reading/commenting. Sprinklemist^{hasn't changed his signature in a long time.} 22:59, May 1, 2012 (UTC)